David Villa's Skinny Jeans (2/3)

Jun 07, 2012 21:57

Title: David Villa's skinny jeans.
Pairing: Lionel Messi/ David Villa.
Rating: NC-17/R - For Language, drug abuse throughout and sexual scenes.
Warnings: Language, drug abuse throughout, homophobia and sexual scences.
Summary: !High school AU! Lionel Messi and David Villa are students who are set an art project together.
Words: 20,000~
Disclaimer: All of ( Read more... )

pairing: messi/villa, high school au

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zoect2 June 7 2012, 23:31:14 UTC
*flails helplessluy* Yay! More!

The Brush Scene (yes, so good it needs capitals) is so powerful, and the bathroom... well. You stumbled across a fairly major kink of mine there; bathroom blowjobs. :)

Itching for part 3 now!

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 16:15:18 UTC
Awww thanks honey! Yeah I adore bathroom blowjobs! Defo a kink I like writing about, especially when it seems slightly taboo, like when they're at school or work or something xD Makes it more exciting I guess! But anyway, thanks for your review and I hope you like the next chapter :) <3 x

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blaugranagram June 8 2012, 03:44:04 UTC
AAAAAAAGH!! I WILL DIE WITHOUT MORE!

That was simply amazing, thank you for sharing. Now go write... ;)

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 16:14:23 UTC
NOOOO! Don't die! :D haha! Thanks so much my dear, the next part should be up tomorrow and I'll see from the feedback there if people think it would be better to make the fic longer :) Thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed it :) x

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lovemessivilla June 8 2012, 07:38:16 UTC
I can't tell you how great this part is. I love the painting scene the best, but their encounter in the bathroom is so awesome too. I can't believe there is just one part left (which I can't wait to read), I want to read many more parts.:D

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 16:13:30 UTC
Aww thanks a lot! Yeah the painting scene was good fun to write :) haha Yeah the last part should be updated tomorrow :) I'm not sure if I'm going to write an epilogue or even make it longer yet, I'll see the feedback on the last chapter :) Glad you enjoyed sweetie <3

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 16:12:26 UTC
omgdfhugjyusvjch! Fan-girled aimlessly at your comment! Thanks so much! It really means a lot that you love this fic, I hope you will like the final chapter :) Should be up tomorrow. I'm going to go all out and say I love you, I care not :') haha <3 x

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 20:11:09 UTC
Your loves is forever welcome here!! xD <3 x

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curlingcurls June 8 2012, 19:09:01 UTC
OMG I just don't know what to say !! I read the whole thing two times in a row, before I could get myself to comment, and even now I am like speechless. Anyway, I looooove it. I can't mention any specific line or portion, because I love every part. I can already predict how awesome the third part will be. But if you are going to continue with this, I'd love it more than ever. So, I really hope you are gonna write more than the three parts you have already written.:) Loving you always.:D

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lets_get_messi June 8 2012, 20:12:29 UTC
Oh my god! Your review has took my breath away! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! :D I may update my final part later this evening as I can't stop writing it XD In saying that, depending on the feedback and suggestions on the next part I may extend the fic :) Thanks again sweetie, your review was wonderful! :) <3

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