a wild ficpost appears!

Feb 24, 2011 23:18

First fill from the fic request meme and it's for breathless_dawn! I hope this is at least sort of what you wanted?

the weight of our tracks
axel/kairi, pg-13, 1585 words

is that marionette real enough yet? )

kingdom hearts, fic

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sephyelysian February 25 2011, 04:55:31 UTC
I am not normally a fan of Sora/Riku/Kairi but when I saw you'd written this, I had to check it out regardless. This is very, very good. It moves beautifully and everyone is so in character. I also love that you included everyone in a fair way!

Wonderful read. Great job.

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lettersandliars February 25 2011, 05:09:35 UTC
Sometimes I think I'm so used to shipping Sora/Riku/Kairi so much that I just sort of forget it's not canon.

Thanks for reading!

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iki_teru February 25 2011, 06:27:59 UTC
:o you mean it's not canon? oh. shit.

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lettersandliars February 25 2011, 12:45:02 UTC
lol right.

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iki_teru February 25 2011, 06:27:31 UTC
YOU

AND THIS

AND WOW

SERIOUSLY.

WOW.

I love this from the very beginning to the very end and ALL THE LITTLE DETAILS, I FEEL LIK I'M SITTING ON THE ISLAND RIGHT NOW and Axel calling her Princess=love AND THE ENDING AND THE "but you're a princess" AND KAIRI BEING ALL BAD-ASS AND GALKJLKSDJF I LOVE YOUR FACE.

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lettersandliars February 25 2011, 12:45:27 UTC
*glomp* <33333

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breathless_dawn February 25 2011, 07:38:59 UTC
EEEEEEE!

THIS IS TOTALLY WHAT I WANTED BECAUSE IT'S AMAZING AND IT'S YOU WRITING AXEL/KAIRI!!!

I love this soooo much, darling, like you don't even know. It's already memed forever and it will be reread like crazy. I love your Axel and oh...oh the ending...♥

I love that Axel is just kind of fading in and out and Roxas -- I LOVED THE BIT WITH ROXAS! -- and you're just a mind reader, I swear. Thank you so much for this! *giant hug is giant*

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lettersandliars February 25 2011, 12:46:36 UTC
I literally can't leave Roxas out when I write about Axel because they are the OTP of my heart, even when I am not shipping them.

I'm so glad you liked it :D

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kaos_sparrow February 25 2011, 20:58:13 UTC
rgrah! I love it, but Axel/Kairi is *wrong* because it's not OT3 *or* Roxas/Azel, but the way you wrote it, it *is*.
SEE WHAT YOU,VE DONE.

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lettersandliars February 28 2011, 04:06:17 UTC
RIGHT. I COULDN'T HELP IT, I SHIP IT A LITTLE NOW.

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