I am not normally a fan of Sora/Riku/Kairi but when I saw you'd written this, I had to check it out regardless. This is very, very good. It moves beautifully and everyone is so in character. I also love that you included everyone in a fair way!
I love this from the very beginning to the very end and ALL THE LITTLE DETAILS, I FEEL LIK I'M SITTING ON THE ISLAND RIGHT NOW and Axel calling her Princess=love AND THE ENDING AND THE "but you're a princess" AND KAIRI BEING ALL BAD-ASS AND GALKJLKSDJF I LOVE YOUR FACE.
THIS IS TOTALLY WHAT I WANTED BECAUSE IT'S AMAZING AND IT'S YOU WRITING AXEL/KAIRI!!!
I love this soooo much, darling, like you don't even know. It's already memed forever and it will be reread like crazy. I love your Axel and oh...oh the ending...♥
I love that Axel is just kind of fading in and out and Roxas -- I LOVED THE BIT WITH ROXAS! -- and you're just a mind reader, I swear. Thank you so much for this! *giant hug is giant*
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Wonderful read. Great job.
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Thanks for reading!
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AND THIS
AND WOW
SERIOUSLY.
WOW.
I love this from the very beginning to the very end and ALL THE LITTLE DETAILS, I FEEL LIK I'M SITTING ON THE ISLAND RIGHT NOW and Axel calling her Princess=love AND THE ENDING AND THE "but you're a princess" AND KAIRI BEING ALL BAD-ASS AND GALKJLKSDJF I LOVE YOUR FACE.
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THIS IS TOTALLY WHAT I WANTED BECAUSE IT'S AMAZING AND IT'S YOU WRITING AXEL/KAIRI!!!
I love this soooo much, darling, like you don't even know. It's already memed forever and it will be reread like crazy. I love your Axel and oh...oh the ending...♥
I love that Axel is just kind of fading in and out and Roxas -- I LOVED THE BIT WITH ROXAS! -- and you're just a mind reader, I swear. Thank you so much for this! *giant hug is giant*
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I'm so glad you liked it :D
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SEE WHAT YOU,VE DONE.
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