Faintly Amazon

May 08, 2005 17:17

Title: Faintly Amazon
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: PG? PG for a first-time fic? I fail.
A/N: For raelala, who became Master of the Universe today. ♥
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A first time involving rain and worms and tangents, but don't they all. )

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mushroom18 May 9 2005, 03:45:56 UTC
Puppy incoherence is just sooo cute. XD

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librae May 10 2005, 02:01:35 UTC
Thanks for reading. :)

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_emeraldgreen May 9 2005, 09:23:56 UTC
"No," Sirius said. "I never had an odd thought in my life. Now shut up."

You got me grinning like a madwoman there! I loved the worms their wormholes and the rain like pebbles.

He knew their rhythm: it was just like breathing. He knew rain and sweat a long time ago. Some moments were ordinary and beautiful and sometimes there was no difference

*happy sigh*

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librae May 10 2005, 02:02:05 UTC
Thank you!

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o_deanna May 9 2005, 12:55:57 UTC
This is too beautiful for words. Only the sound of rain is equal to how beautiful this is. ♥

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librae May 10 2005, 02:02:35 UTC
mwee
Thank you.

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anniesj May 9 2005, 15:26:46 UTC
Ohhhhhhhh!!!

I just adore your writing. You always pick up on the simplest things and give them great meaning and beauty, from the way raindrops sound like rice to the sudden worry of overdue library books, and the ending was just flawless. I adored every word of this. <333

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librae May 10 2005, 02:03:07 UTC
Yaaay, thank you!! Double exclamation points!!

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ex_stateline124 May 9 2005, 16:27:25 UTC
mm, cate's right. sirius' line is fantastic. he's such a bastard, and i LOVE IT. i also like to imagine that sirius was trying to make him shut up so he could kiss him. (<--- sap.)

oh, sarah.

and no, i definitely did not start singing "there will be no regrets when the worms come, and they will surely come"...

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librae May 10 2005, 02:03:38 UTC
And I definitely didn't start singing "Waiting for the Worms" or whatever the hell that song's called.

Oh, Rina!

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