Faintly Amazon

[librae]

Title: Faintly Amazon
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: PG? PG for a first-time fic? I fail.
A/N: For raelala, who became Master of the Universe today. ♥
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Comments

[pre_raphaelite1]

*sits in stunned silence*

[librae]

::snaps fingers::
Hi. :)

[pre_raphaelite1]

*shakes her head, blinking her eyes slowly*

Uhh... Hi. *smiles with a guilty blush*

I'm struggling find words to really explain how much I like this. It's amazing. The rhythm of it and the imagery flow so brilliantly together. Beautiful.

[librae]

Well, thank you so much. :)

[sheafrotherdon]

The imagery in this is bloody gorgeous, and the lyricism of the lines -- aie, I love.

But I confess, it's this line that means you own me:

"No," Sirius said. "I never had an odd thought in my life. Now shut up."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! omg I laughed out loud. *LOVES*

[librae]

I love that line too. I love SIRIUS, caustic asshole.
Danke danke danke, C8.

[riverflame]

Mmmmm. Beautiful, gorgeous, lovely, and so very sweet! Absolutely wonderful.

[librae]

Thank you!

[dogeared]

Ack, I love this, and especially If this moment, if this day were everything . . . it would be too big and too precious all at once, and even now his throat closed to think of it, and how I can almost smell the spring rain, it's so perfectly described.

[librae]

Oh, thank you! I've been trying to touch on smell more lately.
It doesn't usually involve worms.

[mona1347]

Oh wow this is gorgeous. I love Remus' whole opening dialog (monologue?) since it reminds me of the strange things I think :). This is so detailed and so clear - very well done!

[librae]

Thanks!