Story Post: Side Effects

Nov 06, 2010 17:44

This is a episode tag to A Coffin For Starsky. Just a little piece of fluff.
About 5,000 words.
Slash, PG rated, more or less.

Side Effects )

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cynatnite November 9 2010, 03:22:47 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this. I could never quite figure out what would have happened after Hutch dumped water on Starsky. This answers that. Great job!

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librathree November 9 2010, 15:33:07 UTC
Thanks! There are so many eps where they're, you know, slightly unkind to each other. I feel like I want to fix all of them. :-)

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tatgoat November 9 2010, 03:33:05 UTC
MMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A bit of sugar but not too sugary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A bit of vinegar but not too sur a bit of pepper but not the the red one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice and balanced story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Welcome back^_-

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librathree November 9 2010, 15:33:32 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you didn't find it TOO sugary (it's pretty fluffy)!

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tatgoat November 9 2010, 15:43:06 UTC
Nope, just right in every count...

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dipslikeramon November 9 2010, 03:58:38 UTC
Oh holy HELL. I've adored your fic and despaired of ever seeing another. My wish was granted. In SPADES!

Dear lord, this was good. So very masculine, so very THEM! You bring such life to these beloved characters and the undercurrents of their relationship.

Damn it was good to read this!! Thanks so much for sharing!!

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lauramcewan November 9 2010, 14:22:11 UTC
Everything Sue said. This story was the right amount of everything!

(ps: marlin, not marlon)

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librathree November 9 2010, 15:35:34 UTC
Duh! And I know that, and looked smack at that word, oh, half a dozen times, and went "it looks weird, but ..." I blame the menopause.

Thanks for the fix and for reading and commenting!

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lauramcewan November 9 2010, 16:03:41 UTC
lol I didn't realize it myself until I found myself back at the beginning of the story - it's such a 'right' spelling, too, and not one we see that often in either incarnation, that I think it's an easy miss!

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igbc November 9 2010, 15:53:44 UTC
This was so great. Please keep writing our guys!

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librathree November 10 2010, 03:53:25 UTC
Thanks so much - you're one of the writers (in two of my fandoms) I admire greatly, so I'm thrilled you enjoyed this.

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diane_c November 9 2010, 20:58:42 UTC
Wow. This is so EXACTLY what I felt like reading, that I couldn't quite believe I was reading it. :) This has all the things I love best -- great dialogue, bittersweet yearning, lovely h/c, interesting emotion, breathless first-time wonder, and some hot, hot kissin'.

Very difficult to choose, but my favorite line: "I love you. I love the hell outta you. You wanna make love with me, today, tomorrow, forever? You got it, you got it, you got it.”

Terrific story!

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librathree November 10 2010, 03:54:00 UTC
Thanks! (That's my favorite line too - somehow I can really hear Starsky saying it)

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