oh my goodness i get first comment what an honor. and can i just say. it's about time, oh my goodness. good job, kai. holding uruha down and getting him to talk like the good boy (or bad boy) that you are. yes. yes. yes. i love me some smut, and your smut is the best smut i've read in a long time, but i /love/ it when that smut get angry and dirty and then there's a reason for it. i am broken and i think i owe you like a million cookies for satisfying my needs. this is just an incredible work of art that's made itself into a masterpiece, and i cannot wait to see the next chapter.
bring aoi back tho. :( he's being an idiot and uru loves him and kai loves him and someone needs to pin him down and teach him a lesson too.
*dusts a velvet seat off for you to sit on* First commentor gets free Uru lapdances and an Aoi fanning them with a huge-ass leaf o______o Congrats tahaha
Uruha's just so full of awesome badness XDD Thank you sooo much hon, I work on that smut like woah...@____@ But I can't just write pure sex without meaning behind it lol It's almost impossible for me taha
Preaze give me cookies, I love them -_____- XD *slaps Aoi upside the head for you* Thank you again for the lovely comment :D
*showers with cookies* i still don't have the proper words for this thing, and it's been days. but i just keep thinking that he should come back in the morning or something and cuddle up to them and apologize for being an idiot. and then let kai and uruha handle him the same way kai handled uru in this chapter. in fact i will give you extra cookies if aoi makes it up to them like a good boy, the way he should. ;A;
gosh i didn't know what my feelings where doing, while reading this! i don't think there was an emotion i left out *lol* i really look forward the next chap! ** even tough it's thr last ;o;
"Hold back for a little longer...." Kai grunted, his breath coming in short panting gasps against Uruha's mouth. Uruha parted his lips for him and Kai kissed him hard, possessively
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I was going to comment on this earlier but i was in class. I've missed this soo much! Holy crap you dont know how much! lol. Thanks for updating! This fic is absolutley, wonderfully enchanting! I love it!(And you for updating^^ <3)
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it's about time, oh my goodness.
good job, kai. holding uruha down and getting him to talk like the good boy (or bad boy) that you are. yes. yes. yes.
i love me some smut, and your smut is the best smut i've read in a long time, but i /love/ it when that smut get angry and dirty and then there's a reason for it.
i am broken and i think i owe you like a million cookies for satisfying my needs.
this is just an incredible work of art that's made itself into a masterpiece, and i cannot wait to see the next chapter.
bring aoi back tho. :( he's being an idiot and uru loves him and kai loves him and someone needs to pin him down and teach him a lesson too.
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Uruha's just so full of awesome badness XDD Thank you sooo much hon, I work on that smut like woah...@____@ But I can't just write pure sex without meaning behind it lol It's almost impossible for me taha
Preaze give me cookies, I love them -_____- XD *slaps Aoi upside the head for you* Thank you again for the lovely comment :D
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i didn't know what my feelings where doing, while reading this!
i don't think there was an emotion i left out *lol*
i really look forward the next chap! **
even tough it's thr last ;o;
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So intense and thick and balanced both in emotion as well as physical interaction!!!
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<3!
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<3 Thank you for reading and enjoying as always hoooon *hugs*
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