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lifeawakening

fic: deus ex machina

May 01, 2011 21:03

Title: Deus Ex Machina [god in the machine]
Chapter: Seven | 2/2
Author: lifeawakening
Words: 8,849 (3,083 for part 2)
Rating: R (For future scary images, language, and sexual references)
Summary: Rachel Berry always knew that she was a little bit psychic. In fact, Rachel Berry thought she knew just about everything. That is, until a spirit that ( Read more... )

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Comments 30

ext_543805 May 6 2011, 13:05:38 UTC

It was highly improbable for me to cave into reading an AU, but... I have an affinity for these characters and an insane craving to read what is out there fic-wise. A lot leaves anything to be desired.

I have read and re-read passages in your fic. I've become invested in HOW or IF ever these two MIGHT finally be together in some fashion, and I fallen IN love with your prose. It's simple, readable, and downright engaging.

The most amazing thing for me? I feel something tangible when I read your words. Frustration, pain, longing. OMG it's almost TOO much. But I guess I'm a glutton for it. I cannot wait to see what you have in store. It's a great ride and read so far.

lifeawakening May 7 2011, 17:19:39 UTC

Ironically enough, I rarely read AU fics myself lol. I agree with you though, a lot of the stories out there leave a lot to be desired, which is why I chose to write. One of the best things you could say to me is that you FELT something when reading my words, because I feel almost too much when writing them and I want nothing more than to be able to transfer that to my readers. Thank you so much for reading (and re-reading) my story and for sticking with it. I really hope you enjoy what I have in store for these two. :)

colliding_kiss May 14 2011, 17:09:47 UTC

OKAY I SINCERELY BELIEVE THIS IS THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER READ AND I WOULD LIKE MORE LIKE, YESTERDAY. I LOVE YOU. MARRY ME. OKAY THAT IS ALL

lifeawakening May 21 2011, 06:58:42 UTC

HOLY SWEET HELL I LOVE YOUR ENTHUSIASM, OF COURSE I'LL MARRY YOU. But uh, seriously, thank you so much for reading!

harukiu22 May 15 2011, 08:22:52 UTC

so...I keep checking your journal twice a day to see if you've updated, is that normal? XD

babiiiribeiro May 19 2011, 03:09:26 UTC

not going to lie, but I do the same..

matrevir May 21 2011, 05:14:54 UTC

gpoy

lifeawakening May 21 2011, 06:55:44 UTC

Oh man. I'm sorry I didn't see this sooner so I could've put you at ease. Chapter 8 will be up later today. And today for me is Saturday. It's actually 12:55 a.m. on Saturday...oh, too much information, okay. Sorry it's late :( I'm like, the worst person ever with deadlines.

magicmumu July 14 2011, 08:56:15 UTC

Okay, another awesome chapter. I love that Rachel gave Quinn the gift of music. That is so in character for her. I love how you've written everyone's character. They are all so true and likable. Even Puck, who is slightly out of character, is such a way that you still see his original character, but because of the AU of this story, still has its room to change. I love that Finn is stilla bit dull, but he wasn't unlikable. I hate Finn normally, and Faberry stories make it easy to keep the Finn Flames alive and hot, but you made me really stop and like him. Still sad about how this ends. I know it can't be happy. Quinn crosses over or Rachel dies. I can see no other way for this to end.

Erin