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fic: deus ex machina

May 21, 2011 20:37

Title: Deus Ex Machina [god in the machine]
Chapter: Eight
Author: lifeawakening
Words: 7,467
Rating: R (For future scary images, language, and sexual references)
Summary: Rachel Berry always knew that she was a little bit psychic. In fact, Rachel Berry thought she knew just about everything. That is, until a spirit that refused to die entered her life like a train ( Read more... )

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Comments 23

freak_girl91 May 23 2011, 16:06:04 UTC

Oh my God.. this chapter killed me! Poor Rachel but poor Quinn as well :( my heart aches for them. I really hope things will get better, even though I'm a sucker for angst. Can't wait for the next part *bounces*

lifeawakening May 23 2011, 17:38:57 UTC

I'm quite the sucker for angst as well, but man even as the writer I hope things get better for them lol. As always, thank you for reading :)

babiiiribeiro May 23 2011, 18:31:59 UTC

This was so worth the wait. I mean, what a fantastic chapter, really! Loads of angst though.. :/ I feel so bad for the girls, Quinn in special. She is probably feeling so guilty about everything, and she loves Rachel, and she only wants to do whats best, BUT DONT LEAVE US, QUINN! I love her too much to see her go! And when she asked if Rachel loved her? And Rachel couldn't say? I was like 'come on, Rachel! It's pretty obvious that you do, so just say it already!' and then my heart broke for Quinn :~

I seriously cannot wait for more, and I hope Rachel will be able to change Quinn's mind about the whole moving on thing. And yeah, this story just keeps getting better and better! Not a surprise though, seeing how great of a writer you are and all.

I hope to see you soon! :)))

lifeawakening May 23 2011, 20:19:39 UTC

My heart breaks for Quinn every time I write for this story lol it's hard. I'm glad it's obvious that Rachel loves Quinn, because she so does :) I'm also glad that it was worth the wait. You humble me with your compliments lol way to make me blush. Thank you so much for reading :)

magicmumu July 14 2011, 09:33:30 UTC

Why didn't you say it Rachel?! Why?! Oh no. I have one more chapter, which means I will have to wait with everyone else to know where this goes and how it will end! Again, Puck and Finn were awesome in this, and I am sad because Quinn's energy is coming from Rachel, meaning that she will someday kill Rachel, and I know that Quinn wouldn't ever be able to handle that. I don't know what that would do to their connection if Rachel were to die because of Quinn.

Erin