You better get here soon, please don't make too much of it [IT]

May 01, 2010 00:45

Title: You better get here soon, please don't make too much of it. [I won't get out alive, take it easy on me]
Chapter: Three
Author: lifeawakening 
Pairing Rachel Berry/Quinn Fabray
Rating: PG for now
Summary: An accident happened after sectionals, and then everything changed. Definite angst, but not the kind that makes you super depressed, just the kind that ( Read more... )

faberry, long title is long

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miss_darkmoon May 3 2010, 07:57:30 UTC
This is really awesome so far :D

A pause - another vibrate. “She doesn’t look good. Yeah, her face is bad. Her demeanor is worse. The golden star that is Rachel Berry has fizzled out, replaced by someone so small that you could step on her.”
- This line made me uneasy for some reason, but I guess it makes sense coming from Kurt, because he's dramatic like that - it just felt for a moment like you talking through him.

And I loved these two lines:

Santana briefly considered performing an illegal abortion on Quinn, but then thought better of it

And the one about Santana saying she would 'pop' Quinn if it wouldn't upset Brittany xD

Great stuff! Can't wait to see more of where this is going :)

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miss_darkmoon May 3 2010, 07:57:57 UTC
Also, OMG, Rachel playing Quinn at the end was fantastic, and I love how bitchy Quinn's been acting.

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lifeawakening May 3 2010, 16:31:32 UTC
Thank you! I'm definitely trying to stay true to character, and I feel like Kurt would THRIVE off of a situation like this as a chance to let his drama show through. Hopefully that's what it's coming across as to you. Thank you for reading :)

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mmb3310 May 4 2010, 04:50:36 UTC
ohhhhhh my gosh!!!

i always eagerly await your installments....well, i suppose always is the wrong word...as it's not all that far along. but!

i enjoyed how i was able to get mad, to get sad, and to laugh. sanatana's little ''soothing'' things she said? hilarious..

anyway, keep up the good work!!! i hope to see a new installment soon. :]

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lifeawakening May 4 2010, 19:51:29 UTC
Thank you so much :) I'm glad you got to feel a wide range of emotions while reading it lol.

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dessa_gleek October 1 2010, 21:43:23 UTC
Simply brilliant. :)

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lifeawakening October 2 2010, 18:43:11 UTC
Thank you! :D

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letterstomaddie October 6 2010, 15:58:05 UTC
“Wait, we will not talk later!”

*DIES OF LAUGHTER* <3

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lifeawakening October 6 2010, 23:23:57 UTC
Hahaha I loved that part too!

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malexfaith October 8 2010, 06:53:09 UTC
Hehe, love it. I'm not a lover of angst at all, but since this came so highly recommended I gave it a go, and so happy I did. So addicted. You write their thoughts perfectly. Thanks heaps for sharing

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lifeawakening October 8 2010, 23:05:33 UTC
To be honest, I can't even read angst 90% of the time lol so I'm glad you gave it a chance anyway!

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