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likeascience

fic: to whom it may concern

May 08, 2015 04:15

Title: to whom it may concern
Pairing: Leslie/Ben
Word Count: ~2800
Rating: PGish?
Timeline: Flu Season 2 AU
a/n: I feel like I should put a warning for angst, so here it is: angst!

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Comments 17

anonymous May 8 2015, 17:23:04 UTC

Trying not to cry in class because I love this so much.

likeascience May 12 2015, 00:02:54 UTC

Thank you!

c00kie May 8 2015, 17:23:39 UTC

Wow. That's seriously all I can say is wow. I was nervous about reading this but man I am so glad I did because it's so lovely and beautiful and heartbreaking and true. I love that you told it from Ben's pov, I love how you told it, but I think most of all I love the way you told it. It was angsty, but it wasn't cliche or over dramatic. It was simple, and therefore all the more devastating. God. I just really loved this. Great job. <3

likeascience May 11 2015, 23:54:23 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS COMMENT. You honestly hit the nail on the head with a lot of the things I was nervous about when writing this (from Ben's POV, being too cliche in the angst), so this means a lot!

stars_inthe_sky May 8 2015, 18:10:26 UTC

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nutriyum_addict May 8 2015, 18:51:28 UTC

Oh, I love this! It is a little angsty and it's definitely sad but it's also lovely. I like that Marlene makes an appearance too!

Really beautiful job. :)

likeascience May 11 2015, 23:56:49 UTC

Thank you! I've really missed having Marlene react to all the things that have happened to Leslie the past few seasons, so I'm glad you liked it :)

ashisfriendly May 8 2015, 22:43:37 UTC

This is beautiful, amazing, amazing, uh mae ZINGGGG. The prose was delicate and pretty and so haunting and sad all in one and it really just floored and put me in a space and took me to a whole new place, like... perfection. This was eye opening from Ben's POV, watching him struggle to find a way to comfort Leslie and to deal with himself was so fascinating and of course heartbreaking and I think you just did a bang up job and are overall extremely amazing. Like I'm still sitting here digesting and as the seconds tick by, it keeps settling nicely. Loved this, thank you so much for writing this.

likeascience May 11 2015, 23:58:02 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS COMMENT. you guys are killing me with your praise right now. I was semi-nervous to post this and your response is so amazing, so thank /you/!