BABY/Paul Dedalus

Mar 23, 2007 21:10

Baby told Chris to climb inside the old truck tire he strained to hold upright. Chris was small and his body curved to fit the hollow inside the tire. Before he had even settled into place Baby pushed the tire down the rubbled hillside with a railroad track at the bottom. He saw the mistake at once. He had expected it to roll smoothly, a wonderful ( Read more... )

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sundayclothes March 24 2007, 00:33:19 UTC
man, did this make me cry or what!

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alfur March 24 2007, 01:01:28 UTC
Okay wow so I probably shouldn't be reading journals at work because customers end up looking at me when I laugh outloud or in this instance get a lil bit teary.

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telegram translucent July 29 2007, 15:43:57 UTC
am alive & miss you
(always too much i never said)

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infromthecold August 9 2007, 20:36:48 UTC
I was thinking today how much I missed your posts, and I went to look for you and saw you had de-friended me :( . I would hope you would consider adding me again, but I understand if not.

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likepatsycline August 9 2007, 20:47:46 UTC
Of course. I'm sorry - I think I've been a bit heavy-handed.

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infromthecold August 9 2007, 23:07:11 UTC
Oh, you're sweet! There was a good 4 or 5 months back at the end of '06 where I didn't post at all, several folks dropped me.

:)

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dear_tuesday August 25 2008, 14:30:25 UTC
I love your writing... but why use such a light color? Do you want your readers to go blind? >___

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