2000 Miles - Chapter 8

[lil_missb]

Ok so I'm really nervous about this one...

Title: 2,000 Miles
Summary: Two thousand miles and more ghosts than that to haunt them.
Pairing: EdwardxWinry.
Spoilers:Post series, so yeah. A little bit of an alternate ending. No movie though. Doesn't even exist.
Rating: PG - NC-17 This chapter: PG
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Comments

Awsome

[littlechemist01]

Izumi was herself and in character, and when i read her lines I saw her in those scenes, making "those" faces she makes, the acid in her voice and how she looks at Edward, I think it was great! I didn't think there was any thing wrong with winry's and Edwards first kiss being there, it been coming for a long time! I am curious of how Edward is going to start reacting/behaving now that he has had a taste of her. But it is good to see him at some peace...

Re: Awsome

[lil_missb]

aww thanks. He really needs it now. Especially for what's to come...

[evil_little_dog]

Haha, I came looking for your story here on LJ as I'd been on FFN earlier and didn't see the latest chapter. But I used ed_winry to find your story.

I really like the peaceful scene from Winry's pov at the end. It's very sweet.

There were a few funky typos ('whole' for 'hole' stood out but I know I saw a few more than that).

I thought Izumi was very much in character (though I half expected her to pitch something at Ed or smack him for arguing with her).

[thegreat_edward]

Oh pleeeeease please, update! <3