Being Human Fic: Addiction

[lila_roxo]

Rating: PG

Pairing: Annie/Mitchell

Summary: Mitchell isn’t the only perceptive one.

Spoilers: Some vague mentions of episode five and six.
Author's Note: First Being Human fic, so I'd really appreciate to get some feedback and ConCrit. Did you like it, love it, hate it with the fiery heat of a thousand suns? Do you think it can be improved? Any and all

Comments

[notcosyatall]

lovely :)

[lila_roxo]

Thanks! ;)

[lila_roxo]

I agree completely, Flustered!Mitchell is good, almost as good as Topless!Mitchell.
I'm delighted that you liked this, skatergurljb, and that you thought the characterizations weren't awkward- I'm always a bit paranoid in that aspect :) .
Also, your icon is mesmerizing! I've been staring at it for at least five minutes instead of posting this...

[lila_roxo]

Haven't watched Sanctuary, but I've heard good things. I might check it out sometime soon. And erm,*cough*, I also seem to have a trend in my fandoms: Moonlight, True Blood, Being Human... Hmmm... I'm sure Freud would find me much more interesting than Anna ;) .

[hazelayes]

I enjoyed this, thanks for the pleasure.

I offer a small bit of concrit? :)

First para: I think this could benefit from a little rearranging. Maybe something like:

Through half-lidded eyes Mitchell watches Annie putter around the kitchen, his fingers curled around a cup of coffee. The warmth of the mug is almost as good as fingers grazing his palm, and he stretches (his back? his legs?), becoming all lazy smiles and slack muscles. After a day at the hospital with spilled blood and mops and as much bleach as he can stand, he needs this.

:) Just a little... creamier?

[lila_roxo]

Oh, I'm happy that you enjoyed the fic :) .
Also, thanks very much for the ConCrit. I absolutely love well given crit, IMO it's one of the things that most polishes your writing style. And I like your suggested re-arrangement, it sounds much snappier. I'm going to edit the fic, but since I'm lazy it's cross-posted on different sites, it might take me a little while. Again, thanks! ;)

[hazelayes]

;) No worries. Good luck with the writing.

[ninamazing]

Waaaaah. I LOVE Annie and Mitchell and domesticity. :D :D

[lila_roxo]

Mmmmmmm ME TOO. They do domesticity the way most people do flirting, y/y? ;)

[twonk_a_bella]

Since watching Being Human I've suddenly started making tea a lot more. My bedroom is always filled with at least 1 empty cup :P
I've give up somking recently as well so I know how Mitchell feels about keeps your hands busy.
Very lovely and speaks volumes to me :) Keep em coming! x

[lila_roxo]

Mmmmm, tea. And kudos on giving up smoking; it's really something to be proud of ;) .
Thanks for reading!