all hell's cubically contained

[lilac_one]

With great thanks to the source of plot bunnies, herein my first writing attempt not for a challenge in over a year. It's Due South, F/K, around 2770 words, PG.

Comments

[pearl_o]

Oh, I enjoyed this.

[lilac_one]

I'm so glad to hear that! I was pretty nervous about posting it, but _aerye_ told me to, and I always listen to her.

[serialkarma]

Oh, I really like this! Sweet and hot (Fraser with a knife, guh), and I love fics where Ray is as instrumental in getting them out of a situation as Fraser is. Lovely!

[lilac_one]

Fraser with a knife, guh

Part of the reason Fraser wound up with the knife is his mouth was because of HCL, the part where Billy licks the knife, and I thought, mmm, the only thing possiblly as knee-wibble inducing as that is Fraser with a knife.

I think in fic Ray tends not to get as much credit towards the success of the partnership as he does in canon, so it was fun to try to show him being a contributing member of their duet.

[china_shop]

Oh, this is great! Fantastic escape section. :)

[lilac_one]

Thank you. I had a lot of fun writing it.

[burntcopper]

Heh. cool. especially the toothpick and the 'I trust you have keys?'

[lilac_one]

Thanks. I couldn't help myself with the key thing. As soon as Ray saw Fraser get cuffed, I knew I would include it.

[shayheyred]

This is wonderful. And that Ray is so creative on the escape. It's interesting to see him have the plan, instead of Fraser, for once.

[lilac_one]

I'm so glad you liked it. The Ray in my head thinks outside the box, and is really motivated by Fraser in danger.