LJ Idol-Week One-Topic: Winding Up

Nov 02, 2010 22:21


           I never imagined things winding up as they have. I have a string of fates intertwining into what I call my life. I want to take you back to the day I saw choice one change my path. The one thing that led to another and then another until the yarn spun and we have what  we have today, an interlocking this and that that means something ( Read more... )

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beautyofgrey November 3 2010, 16:12:49 UTC
Wow. That sounds like quite the whirlwind, there. I'm glad you have happiness, though.

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lilyinchains November 3 2010, 16:45:07 UTC
Thank you.

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n_maranda_coy November 3 2010, 16:28:22 UTC
If we always knew where our footsteps led us, it would be a dull life.

Well-written.

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lilyinchains November 3 2010, 16:46:10 UTC
Sometimes it does help to watch where you're going. ;) Thanks.

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i_17bingo November 3 2010, 16:37:16 UTC
I feel all afterglowy reading this.

Also, this line is a lot more ambiguous than it appears at first glance:
I smiled and was truly special because I didn't feel evil.

I cannot wait to read your Week 2 entry.

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lilyinchains November 3 2010, 16:47:20 UTC
I left out the "it". It should have read "...it was truly special..." Hope that doesn't mess it up for you. :)

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i_17bingo November 3 2010, 18:50:51 UTC
Oh, well that changes EVERYTHING

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antianhedonia November 3 2010, 17:59:17 UTC
This was amazing and inspiring. Thank you for sharing it with us. I especially loved this line, and stopped to stare at it and think about it for a while:

she was an escape until she became my prison.

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lilyinchains November 9 2010, 17:48:27 UTC
Thank you very much.

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phoenixejc November 3 2010, 18:57:08 UTC
Very well written!

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lilyinchains November 9 2010, 17:48:43 UTC
:)

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