LJ Idol: Week 5-Topic-Afterthought

[lilyinchains]

When he walked into the room, he set it on fire. I wanted him like I've never wanted a man. I was sure of it. I felt it in my bones. I never made a mistake when it came to spontaneous internal combustion. I knew that he was the one....then she followed him right in. On afterthought....
          I remember the moment as if it were

Comments

[slow_turning]

Fate is a wonderful thing.

I love this story :)

[lilyinchains]

Thanks.

[basric]

I can't believe the parking lot incident. It could have turned out so horrible for you. I'm happy though it didn't and you're still happy with him.

[orpheus77]

Believe me, I gave her grief for being so trusting. Good thing I'm not a psycho - but I'll admit she has pretty good instincts about people.

[lilyinchains]

I am still very happy with him. :)

[the_nites_gurl]

Classic and perfect fairytale

[lilyinchains]

Thanks.

[alphaloria]

The opening of this is powerful. Really enjoyed this entry.

[lilyinchains]

Thank you, I thought maybe it was boring, but I'm never a great judge of my own writing.

[sweeny_todd]

so very sweet :-)

[sweeny_todd]

*sigh* too many tabs open as I read and try to comment :-/

What I *actually* meant to say was that being able to trust your gut is a wonderful thing indeed. I am glad that your tale turned out for the best!

[lilyinchains]

LOL, this comment is better!

[lilyinchains]

It was, it is, and will be.