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Present Progressive

Jun 14, 2007 00:47

Title: Present Progressive
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Ryan stops writing in online journals because he gets a real one.
Word Count: 10,136
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Thanks to notshybutsly, jocondite, and castoffstarter for the terrific beta help.

For jzbell, happy graduation!

( the past and pending )

brendon/ryan, nc-17

Comments 170

jae_w June 14 2007, 23:48:51 UTC

I liked this a lot -- the writing was beautiful, and the characterizations very interesting. I really liked Brendon & Ryan's relationship and the dynamic between them, and the way Ryan's journal tied it all together. And it was very hot as well -- just great.

theaerosolkid July 28 2007, 05:29:30 UTC

Thanks! I can so easily see Ryan Wretchtard Ross being so completely obsessed with a paper journal.

bitofinertia June 14 2007, 23:58:53 UTC

jesus christ. wow. thats all i can really say right now. definitely one of the most amazing works of fiction ive ever read.

theaerosolkid July 28 2007, 05:30:34 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! That's a lovely compliment to receive <3

i_only_dream June 15 2007, 00:06:14 UTC

i saw the word fisting...
and i practically dove for the mouse.
i was a little skeptical about how this would all be done. but omg, did you pull through. everything about it was just so perfect and to the T....
as wierd as it sounds, that story kinda makes me want to be a gay man.
-sigh-
*adds to memories*
<33333

theaerosolkid July 28 2007, 05:30:50 UTC

YAY FISTING OMG. Haha, I'm glad that it worked for you!

lexicon June 15 2007, 01:26:13 UTC

.........................I can't say anything coherent about this right now. All I can say is that I love this, it was absolutely perfect, and hot, and wonderful. And while the sex was pretty integral to it, I think my favorite parts were the in-between moments. And the end?

The reporter's eyes wander to Ryan's journal, left open on the couch. Brendon follows his gaze and stretches his arm out, slams the journal shut.

Ngghhh. I love Brendon. So much. And you even more for writing this.

theaerosolkid July 28 2007, 05:31:19 UTC

Protective!Brendon wins at life. Man, I love him :D

Thanks so much!!

ryrolovesbden June 15 2007, 01:27:59 UTC

I can't even begin to adequately describe how amazing this story was. You managed to roll so many incredible things into this one story... WOW. You are a fantastic writer - god, I loved this so much. Definitely going in memories. There should be a Slash Hall of Fame for this story. Seriously.

theaerosolkid July 28 2007, 05:31:41 UTC

Thank you so much!

Hall of Fame, huh? NICE.