Present Progressive

[lilywhitelilith]

Title: Present Progressive
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Ryan stops writing in online journals because he gets a real one.
Word Count: 10,136
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Thanks to notshybutsly, jocondite, and castoffstarter for the terrific beta help.

For jzbell, happy graduation!

Comments

[flimsy]

Oooh, that was lovely. I love the idea of Ryan with his journal and that it was Brendon who gave it to him. Their relationship developed so quietly and naturally and I think it's one of my most favorite approaches to how they work I've read in fic so far.

[theaerosolkid]

Eee, thanks! The tiny little things are so awesome, fr srs.

♥

[bdensxbitch]

i can't even form a coherent sentance, you have no FUCKING idea.
this was like. ohmygod. you really have like no clue how much you have me like, licking at your shoes right now, kay.
that was just. wow just. wow ohmygod i'm like litterally saying all of this out loud and then writing it down. yes, that vibrator. and then the fisting. and the mouth fucking. OHMYGODDDDDDD.
yeah and this took me like 2 hours to read because i just KEPT reading it.
and now i'm just going to stop talking altogether because i give up, I CAN'T FIND MY BIG HUGE DAILY VOCABULARY, THANKYOUVERYFUCKINGMUCH<3.

[theaerosolkid]

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked this, seriously :D

[darksylvia]

AHAHAHA. I love this so much I'm feeling a little incoherent and have to keep going back and fixing my spelling. THE PORN. THE JOURNAL AS A PRESENT. BRENDON'S UTTER ASSURANCE WITH ALL THINGS RYAN.

*explodes*

[theaerosolkid]

Yay porn! Yay incoherence! Thanks :D

[rhinemaiden]

When I started reading this, I just really liked your writing style. It perfectly fits the mood you were creating, but when I got to the part with the Mozart/Beethoven analogy, I knew, I just knew that I would love this (because classical music is my one true love... but trying to write slash about, well, old, dead, somewhat ugly, white guys is just not that appealing). Umm, yeah, that just conjured up some really disturbing images... err, sorry

[theaerosolkid]

The funny thing to me with the Mozart/Beethoven analogy is that it's not even accurate. Pete and Patrick apparently fight all the time! But, perception is reality. I don't necessarily agree with everything I write in my stories, but I believe that the characters believe them, so. I guess outside-looking-in is really the best position ;)

Thank you so much for this comment! Amazing feedback, really.

I'm so glad you liked this.

[saline_joy]

OH MY GOD. Okay, so you talked about this, and I was excited because VIBRATORS!! but I did not know that it was going to CONSUME MY SOUL WITH PORNY FIRE. OR SOMETHING. Journals! Ryan Ross's wrists! Porn! \O/ And not just some sex, but fingering and vibrators and fisting, GAH. I'm going to be over here flailing my hands at you and re-reading this for awhile.

[theaerosolkid]

YAY! I'm so glad you liked this! VIBRATORS AND FISTING AND RIMMING AND SNOWBALLING AND FINGERING, what more could you want!?