Present Progressive

[lilywhitelilith]

Title: Present Progressive
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Ryan stops writing in online journals because he gets a real one.
Word Count: 10,136
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Thanks to notshybutsly, jocondite, and castoffstarter for the terrific beta help.

For jzbell, happy graduation!

Comments

[kaytvengeance]

So.Um.Yea

[theaerosolkid]

Holy God, I love your feedback *smishes you* Seriously, people like you make waiting for comment notifications a serious joy. You may have ruined me for comments forever! ;)

I love that pretty much nothing happens in this story at all, to be honest. I just think that characters are so much more important than plots, and it's so great to see that my oddball ways of doing things are well-received.

Thanks again!!

[fabledfaith]

Oh my god, I am speechless.
My 14 year old mind, jesus christ.

That was the sexiest thing I have ever read in my entire life.
Uh.
And probably will be.
For the rest of my life.

[jesikalovesyou]

wow. my 14-year-old mind couldn't have handled it.
heck, my 18-year-old almost broke down.

[brenheartsry]

totally agree w/ the 14 year old mind thing...mine was boggled!!! and lol for the 18 year old mind...but i bet at 18 i would still be broken down by this :D

[fabledfaith]

totally. it's crazy.

[brenheartsry]

*is speachless* woah...just holy fucking shit! that was sexy! that was cute! that was beautiful! that was funny! that was just...WOAH!!! i am totally in love w/ this. i saw it and decided to read it on a whim then when i was over half way through i was like...how long is this? then saw the 10,000 words and was even more amazed...but that bit from me was kinda random..had no point...but the way you portray brendon and ryan is just so brilliant, and i could easily believe that them being together would just be a thing that no one talked about, but everyone knew about...and joked about on occasion...just...wow...this was probably one of the best things i have every read...you combined porn w/ cuteness and beauty...its the perfect package and i must say i adore you now. *gives you a GIANT GIAN HUG, 23986728634968749687439634968340643706943806934806934806480634806394063409634096734096734096734068934096834096938406349 mgaic LJ cookies, and a big kiss* love this and you too much...oh and *agrees w/ ghostridethworship about needing a cold

[theaerosolkid]

Wow, thank you so much! That was an amazing comment, sorry it took me so long to respond!

♥

[rock_my_town]

Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes.

I seriously need to go smoke a cigarette now.

I love everything about this. Ryan's inadequacey complex, Brendon being a musical prodigy (YES), their connection, physical, mental, emotional, and the PORN OMG. THE BEST. there was a bit of everything and RIMMING AND FISTING HOLY SHIT MY PANTIES.

isduhfiubhkduash SO AMAZING.

[theaerosolkid]

*lights your cigarette*

Thanks so much! Gah, musicalprodigy!Brendon fucking kills me, holy shit.

[breathingtubes]

Oh my... I think you just killed every last cell within my body. I cannot think straight, but I wish I could because then I wouldn't be leaving such a half-assed comment.

That was just, I don't know how to describe it and amazing just doesn't cut it. I don't think any word in the English language could express how much I adore this.

Basically, I think I just fell in love with this story, as sad and pathetic as that may sound to you. I'm adding this to my memories because I just know this will get re-read so many times that my eyes will bleed.

Loveloveandloveagain.

[theaerosolkid]

Falling in love with stories is not sad OR pathetic! I do it all the time, seriously.

Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me what you thought <3