Present Progressive

[lilywhitelilith]

Title: Present Progressive
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Ryan stops writing in online journals because he gets a real one.
Word Count: 10,136
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Thanks to notshybutsly, jocondite, and castoffstarter for the terrific beta help.

For jzbell, happy graduation!

Comments

[jocondite]

Oh, god, you know I love this - and I love, love love how you've tied it up, it's absolutely perfect.

I'm not particularly kinky even in fic, unless the writer's good enough to draw me in, convince me that it's believable for the characters, make me find it hot - and oh, you're not only good enough to do that, you're amazing, and even on the (mostly) re-read it absolutely just takes my breath away. And above and beyond the hot (no, really, the hot) - it's just so exquisitely characterised, I love your Ryan and Brendon so much, I love the journals. I love the way you write about writing. Beautiful, beautiful fic. ♥

[theaerosolkid]

Man, thanks so much. That means a lot to me, it really does. And thanks again for your help, this thing was a real monster to write :D and you were such a great help.

[insunshine]

OH MY GOD.

I like.

There is no coherence at this point.

Seriously? SERIOUSLY. OH MY GOD.

This was.

There aren't really words to describe how good this is. Like, amazingly impossibly good.

I can barely even function. Memories for SURE.

[theaerosolkid]

Ahaha!! Thank you SO MUCH! I really appreciate the comment, and the memory ;)

[shaggiethegreat]

i"m kinda useless at useful comments... but this is really awsome!
I love how normal you made them. How this wasn't all formulaic you know like hey we kissed obviously we're in love. and the thing with the sex and not being sure and the insecurities and of course the starburst because really starburst are awsome. Everyone can bond over starburst.
%hearts;

[theaerosolkid]

Starburst ftw!! Thanks for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate it! :D

[jesikalovesyou]

you just made me cry.

like really cry.
tears, runny nose, choking, whimpering.

ahhhhhh...

wow. i think you fulfilled everything i have ever wanted in a fic ever. every-single-thing. this is absolutely my favorite fic ever ever ever ever.

first: the diary thing.
i mean, i love journals. i love empty notebooks that you can fill with your thoughts (or recounts of last night's sex). and ryan doing that in his journal, talking about everything he wanted from brendon was awesome.

second: kissing.
i love it when ryan and brendon just lay together and kiss. it's not like kinky or anything, it's just cute and... just cute. and i love it.

third: ryan fingering himself.
perhaps the hottest thing ever. him secretly doing it all the time and writing about it in his journal! *squee* amazing. and him loving it and imagining it happening when brendon blows him. i don't know why but guys fingering themselves just gets to me. and the vibrator part. 'cause you knows it's there tempting him. he just has to try it out. and that makes me squirm

[theaerosolkid]

Aaaw, man, thank you. That means so much to me, ti really does.

I'm so glad you liked this! Fisting is always kind of tough to write, so it makes me happy to hear that you liked it.

Thanks again for reading, and for the awesome feedback :)

[ghostridethwhip]

D:
HOLY FECKIN SHIT.
*loses complete coherency*
ASDAGFHFDHJGF <33345

I absolutely LOVE this story ... *takes cold shower*
Beautifully characterized like some of the others have said and really creative as well!
Loved Brendan listening to Tchaikovsky and fictional Ryan with a sparkly vibe = )
Dialogue during the fisting was orgasmic, ohh maaan how can you live with yourself damn.
This may very well be the best Ryden fic Ive ever seen.
Ohmygaaaa.

[theaerosolkid]

Heehee! Thanks so much! That's a great compliment; there's a metric fuckton of Brendon/Ryan slash out there.