Present Progressive

[lilywhitelilith]

Title: Present Progressive
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Ryan stops writing in online journals because he gets a real one.
Word Count: 10,136
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Thanks to notshybutsly, jocondite, and castoffstarter for the terrific beta help.

For jzbell, happy graduation!

Comments

[theaerosolkid]

Man, thank you. I'm so glad you liked it :D

[shinyboot]

I'm only half way through this and I've got to go to work, like right now, but I can already tell this is going into my memories. Like somebody above me mentioned, I love that this starts at the beginning of the relationship and they aren't jumping strait into sex, but it builds up to it. Awesome.

And OMG! Fictional Ryan and I may have the same vibrator! I'm not sure how to feel about this.

[theaerosolkid]

Aaaw, hey, thanks!! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment, means a lot :)

aha!! crazy!!

[pyraterose]

hot damn...

wow. I think you totally nailed the characters, I could totally see this happening for real. The writing was fantastic and you have an amazing style. *memories*

[theaerosolkid]

Heehee, thanks!! That means a lot :D

[disarm_d]

OH GOOD GOD. I woke up an hour earlier than I needed to today, and I was all GRRR. Well, whatever, I'll just check my friends list. AND THEN THIS WAS HERE! And because I woke up early, I actually had time to read the whole thing. And now I am very happy.

Ryan writing in his journal, and how he would have to look at the keyboard because he has to look at his guitar strings (SO TRUE!) was just fantastic. And Brendon and his musical house just melted my heart! AND BRENDON KNOWING CLASSICAL MUSIC! OH GOD. JUST WHEN I THOUGHT HE COULDN'T GET ANY HOTTER. AND HE WOULD KNOW, BECAUSE HE PLAYS PIANO AND HAS OBVIOUSLY BEEN CLASSICALLY TRAINED. OH GOD.

I love that they each had their own kinks, but that they, I don't know, worked together and accepted each other and it was all very sweet and. Kinky! hahahaha.

Clearly my brain hasn't quite woken up yet, but I wanted to leave a comment before I left for class so that I didn't forget, because this really was fabulous. YAY!

[theaerosolkid]

Brendon with the music is the hottest thing ever! Ohh God. And I'm glad to hear that the kinks worked out well, that was kind of insane, navigating all those quirks. Ahaha. Fisting = quirk, obviously.

\o/ Thanks again!!

[suebot]

Holy Crap.
That may be the most amazing thing I have ever read.
It was just... WOW.
I.. yeah. Wow.

[theaerosolkid]

Aaaw, thanks!! Incoherency = WIN. :D