Comments | lilywhitelilith: Here Be Dragons

lilywhitelilith

Here Be Dragons

Oct 12, 2007 21:43

Title: Here Be Dragons
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Time travel fic! adellyna and foxxcub both did Jon/Spencer time travel fics, and, um, I like my OTP, so there you have it.
Word Count: 6083
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Happy birthday to me! Thanks to notshybutsly for the beta, and adellyna for stroking my ego :)

( let's make this our story (some kind of fairytale) )

brendon/ryan, time-travel, nc-17

Comments 109

frequencies October 22 2007, 08:02:29 UTC

I should not approve, but I do! So hard! This is so pretty and sweet and Brendon! Is entirely precious! Ryan's reasoning is original and also awesome. He is not just a creep who wants to fuck baby Brendon! He has tru luv in mind!

Hearts, you, and happy birthday again. :)

theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:24:40 UTC

BRENDONNN. It's all about troo luv, Meg!

♥

melish October 22 2007, 08:08:29 UTC

apparently Brendon knew about a metric fuckton more about sex than Ryan.

LOL.
Oh, my God.
I have never, ever, ever read anything so magnificently pulled off.
The plot was amazing, the YOUNGBREN-OLDERRY sex, the slow emotional mood behind it and just the thoughts, the feelings the characters, were just so fucking BRILLIANT that my mind is just a complete pile of mush.

I want to believe that this happened.

The way you wrote it, so matter-of-factly with just every single thing described so intensely is just.. fucking.. unbelievable.

It's an ugly, rough noise, young and inexperienced and Ryan knows it's the very first time Brendon has allowed himself to make any sort of noise when he comes.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.
I'm sorry. This was just, so, so good.
Just.
Memories.

Fabulous.
Utterly, hands down, fabulous.

theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:25:07 UTC

\o/ Thank you!!

Dude, I'd be so happy if this actually happened. Baby Brendon!!

fly_meaway October 22 2007, 08:44:57 UTC

Oh wow, this is absolutely lovely. You manage to pull this whole concept off so well and I love how it moves between scenes, the flow feels so good. And just absolutely love the voices. Beautiful.

theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:25:37 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the flow worked for you :)

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theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:25:59 UTC

I know indeed! I mean, Brendonnn. Gahh.

Thanks!!

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theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:27:05 UTC

\o/

Haha, don't make your head hurt, the time travel was a flimy excuse for hot underage sex, nothing more.

Thanks!!