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lilywhitelilith

Here Be Dragons

Oct 12, 2007 21:43

Title: Here Be Dragons
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Time travel fic! adellyna and foxxcub both did Jon/Spencer time travel fics, and, um, I like my OTP, so there you have it.
Word Count: 6083
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Happy birthday to me! Thanks to notshybutsly for the beta, and adellyna for stroking my ego :)

( let's make this our story (some kind of fairytale) )

brendon/ryan, time-travel, nc-17

Comments 109

exsequar October 22 2007, 09:50:26 UTC

Ohohoh! The first porn I've dared to read at school, and it is a doozy. You had me squirming here! You know that I lovelovelove how you write both of our boys - you give them such depth and complexity, it makes me so happy. I love all the little details - baby!Brendon sleeping to classical music, under a sheet even when it's scorching hot. The mini timeline Ryan worked out to make sure he got the perfect night with Brendon was so precious. I loved that Ryan's expectations for Brendon were completely turned on their head, and his answer to that is time travel. Hee!

And then, of course, the sex. The fumbling, tentative, yet brave and instinctively awesome baby!Brendon. His adorable embarassment at the naughty words! Aww!! And the rumming was, um, omghot. *fans self* I loved this story MASSIVELY. :D ( ... )

theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:27:42 UTC

HAHAHHAHAHA YOU NAUGHTY CHILD.

I'm so glad you liked this!! It was tons of fun to write :D

SURPRISE ME WITH AN OTP ICON PLS?

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theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:28:32 UTC

Yay! Thanks :D

faded_memories October 22 2007, 10:08:40 UTC

Wow. This was very well done -- incredibly well written and full of great visuals. The pacing was great, and I'm a sucker for innocence/experience. :D Also, time travel fic is made of sunshine and rainbows. Thanks for sharing.

theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:29:28 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D

[INSERT COMMENT OF EFFUSIVE LOOOVE HERE] jzbell October 22 2007, 10:32:38 UTC

*has no willpower whatsoever*

Oh, Telis, this was everything I could have hoped for!!! Baby Brendon is so perfectly adorable, I can't even deal with it. And and lanky, gorgeous Ryan! Who just loves Brendon so much omg! OTOTP OH MAN.

"In the future, you know. It's always me on bottom. That's how I like it best. We've never done it the other way, actually. I mean. It's just. Really, really good like that."

Hi, I can't help feeling a little like this was in there JUST FOR ME. And I mean, even if it wasn't, I'M GOING TO PRETEND IT WAS. BECAUSE OMG YES. ♥_♥

"Well, yeah," Brendon says, kissing him with only a bit of reservation, as though he remembers clearly where Ryan's mouth has been and is studiously trying to not think of it, trying to show Ryan how grown-up he is.

OH MY GOD, BABY BRENDON, COME HERE AND LET ME PET YOU.

Ryan nods jerkily, "Please," and Brendon likes that, closes his eyes and bites at his lip, while he fumbles for Ryan's cock.

Oh, man, I love how you can just see flickers of now!Brendon coming out already ( ... )

Re: [INSERT COMMENT OF EFFUSIVE LOOOVE HERE] theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:30:44 UTC

IT KIND OF WAS.

Ahem. I'm glad this was good for you ;) because I had too much fun plotting it out in my head. Like. It was epic.

♥ ♥ ♥

ryrolovesbden October 22 2007, 12:41:12 UTC

Oh yes. This is wonderful!!

theaerosolkid October 23 2007, 07:30:56 UTC

Thanks!!