[fic] What a chance - Reita/Ruki - 6

May 17, 2009 16:51

Title: What a chance
Chapters: 6/?
Author: Read more... )

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misss_vampire May 17 2009, 20:28:40 UTC
awwww.. that was cute *slight chuckle* and the smutt scene was hot enough, I'm glad we're seeing some progress in their relationship!! XD

Althou, I see Aki's mother is already suspecting something, is she gonna try to find out? or threaten Taka? ohhh the posibilities... O.o....

Glad you updated!!!

Ran

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limaccia_san May 17 2009, 20:40:36 UTC
Hot enough XD ..Yeah they were getting frustrated, you know U_U *lol*

So many possibilities and maybe some sensational development.. who knows *shrugs*

I'm glad you liked *nods* and thank you for commenting again *squeeze*

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kawasakininja May 18 2009, 00:06:51 UTC
You write so much sweetness in your chapters :) Just one sweet moment after another. I liked how Ruki couldn't help thinking dirty thoughts, being worried Reita will think of him as a pervert, lol. But yes, their relationship is developing nicely in that way too, they are not rushing things but they are going ahead. It flows very naturally. I think I was frustrated to with their parents interrupting them all the time :) But thankfully Reita relieved Ruki's pain, that certainly wasn't easy for Ruki. Parents could become more of a problem, still lets hope for the best. Ending scene was just too sweet, with their love confession at the very end.

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limaccia_san May 18 2009, 10:47:19 UTC
Ah I'm shocked of myself: in this fic, as you said I'm writing one sweet moment after another and, considering that I'm totally a NOT sweet person, I'm surprised that this turned out like that, I'd never guess that I'd able to write something like this.
Yeah XD reading it again make me frustrated too.. all those interruptions XD.. I'm mean like that U_U.
Ah they have to confess, and they are just too lovely together T0T

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you liked this chap too *bows*
Keep reading ^O^/

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daisukirain May 18 2009, 01:52:41 UTC
that was just soo uber CUTE :DDDDD
and lol takas dad knocking on the door while they were doing there 'business'
i laughed so hard i almost fell off my chair. XD
lol
lshafomc (laughed so hard almost fell off my chair) ♥

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limaccia_san May 18 2009, 10:53:05 UTC
lshafomc O_O thank you for the "translation" I'd never understand without it X'D.
I'm glad you liked that scene, it's was fun imagining Taka's face when he got the door.. poor him, such an embarrassing situation XD
Thank you for keeping reading and commenting *grabs* ^O^/

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eatingthepie May 18 2009, 06:01:48 UTC
this was adorable as always >3< aki and taka are so cuuute together <3~ i want a boyfriend like rei ... hell, i want rei xD
“He glared? ...hum… but... did that glaring mean something like: “Stop molesting my son, you faggot” or something like “OMG, what’s wrong with your hair”?” that made me giggle .3.
and omg, aki's mom is a bitch *beats her w/ a fish*
looking forward to more~

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limaccia_san May 18 2009, 11:46:40 UTC
They make you want to squeeze them, ne?? Soooo cute *nods*
XD I thought about that carefully,it had to be something stupid and seems like I did it..XD glad you appreciated..
Yeah let's beat her up >_<

Thank you for reading and commenting ^O^

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limaccia_san May 18 2009, 11:58:36 UTC
Yeah he didn't expect it U_U but he's all happy now ^//^

Right U_U it's normal if you have strange thoughts about your boyfriend.. especially if your boyfriend is Reita san *ç*

Thank you for reading and commenting again *grabs* ^O^/

*lol again at your icon*

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