Alive Pt 4

[limnological]

Title: Alive Pt 4
Author: limnological
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: TaengSic
Description: AU

Comments

[kaorujin]

-inserts LED sign of my heart breaking

[limnological]

-inserts LED sign of 'I love you' :D-

[taengkyu]

I like this story :) feels like its going to end sadly tho.

[limnological]

Haha, thank you for enjoying it!

[anonymous]

This story is so good but so sad. Please dont kill Jessii author. Let them be together :( and pretty please update soon ..

[limnological]

Welp, hope you've read part 6!

[sparksfly7]

“I’ve never met a person like you.”

“You probably never will. I’m one of a kind.”

Yes you are, Sica ;)

I love the stories you have here. Did you write them yourself? They're very interesting, and not just any other cliched fairy tale.

So...Jessica's illness is related to her heart. I thought so. I'm almost certain she's going to die at the end of this *sniff* I'm trying to prepare myself for it, but I'm sure I'll be crushed anyway.

[limnological]

I did not write the little short stories. They were written/collected by my friend walkinginsnow. :) She helped me lots by sharing with me! Sorry for this late reply, I get so busy and distracted sometimes, haha.

[anonymous]

Great chapter. The "Shiver" and "Horror" story scenes were hilarious. Everything was well written (as always), but this bit of T/J interaction really popped for this reader.

“What’s wrong with your heart?”

“Too many things.”

“Are you getting surgery?

“No. I’ve always had a knack for rejecting hearts. Should have seen those freshman boys in high school."

Love the fact that the meaning of dialogue is stated without the characters explicitly saying it -- very hard thing to do, but always well done throughout "Alive".

One more thing: the "come at me bro" LED detail about J was awesome.

Thanks for the post. On to part 5.

[limnological]

Well thank you Anon! I really enjoyed writing that part too. I feel like we pick out the same parts that we enjoy. :)