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Lonely Ch 4

Aug 10, 2013 00:55

Title: Lonely Ch 4
Author: limnological
Rating: PG
Pairing: YoonYul
Description: AU, Slice of life

( People always wanted her attention. )

snsd, slice of life, jessica jung, im yoona, yoonyul, kwon yuri, tiffany hwang, jeti

Comments 3

blacktomatolive August 10 2013, 10:10:57 UTC

Thank you for cutting my wait short. Glad to see another chap up.
Yoonyul is progressing well. And the perspective you give to yoongie is another good technique to use for readers to relate. Jongmal gumawooooo. :D

yuukistar22 August 10 2013, 20:32:22 UTC

This is so cute >_< and updated to quickly. Yay~
I like the fact that you included some of Yoona's past into the equation, her perspective is a little saddening but in a way she has more in common with Yuri than she thinks.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing.

checkinyourbra August 17 2013, 15:56:39 UTC

Baaaaaaaahhhh Yoona's nervously hinting at them hanging out. Awwwwwww my Yoonyul feelssssss. WHY IS THIS SO PRECIOUS!?

Dang. I hate the frustration of staring at a blank sketchbook. YUL, YOU HAVE A MUSE. Go get 'er! :3

Also, I love how their issues with words are paralleled. They have no idea how much they have in common. <3

Thanks for this!!