Bones Fic: Sorrow & The Sea

[limone1]

Title: Sorrow & the Sea

Disclaimer: Bones belongs to FOX, Hanson and Reichs

Rating: T

Spoilers: 622, but I'm spoiler free!

A/N: The "obligatory" The Hole in the Heart episode tag.
rachg82  and I tried (and succeeded!) to identify a poem with the sea a while back, the waves stayed with me.

Comments

[a_mistletoe]

Corker in a rippling seventh wave way. It makes tangible the intangible which Brennan must find so frustrating. Does she know what it means? Is there proof?

I liked this very much by the way.

[limone1]

Wow, you have half the makings of a ficlet in your three sentences about tangible intangibles and proof!

Glad you liked it btw.

Crossing my fingers lj will post this, every bl**dy reply has taken at least two tries!!!

[a_mistletoe]

Well, mention poetry and my poetry criticism gene kicks in. I'm just a student with a clever turn of phrase at heart. Couldn't do more than three sentences though. He he.

*pokes lj for good measure*

[limone1]

The seventh wave was clever too.

[2bbornot2bb]

Gorgeous word picture - gave me tingles! Thank you!! :)

[limone1]

Thank you. I'm a picture person.
I'm tickled you're tingled ;)

[huronia]

This was beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.

[limone1]

Thank you for reading and letting me know you liked it.

[tempertemper]

Oh I LOVE this.. particularly the 'later' and the 'now'... and the deeper look at why Brennan worried that she makes people leave. Heartbreaking.

Just gorgeous ♥

[limone1]

Thank you, bb ♥ As 'later' and 'now' and Brennan's worries were my main ideas (not much room for more in this little ficlet!) I'm thrilled it all worked for you.

Now where's your fic ;)

[tempertemper]

I have a problem with mine - I keep changing my mind whether I think they "went there" or not... which is kinda pivotal to, you know, Bren and Ange talking about whether they went there. So don't expect it anytime soon ;)

DAMN SHOW!

[limone1]

I can see how that may complicate it for you somewhat...

Wonder if HH has made up his mind or is keeping options open for S7? We're probably meant to keep guessing.

*Has bright idea* You could write TWO fics to cover both options ;)

[rachg82]

Grief will come later. When the loss is part of the fabric of their lives

So true.

Your insight into Brennan's insecurities is dead-on as well.

I'm so glad our poetry brainfunk helped inspire you! Hee.

[limone1]

So pleased you think the grief not being the first reaction and Brennan's insecurities work. There is one thing wanting to tell something and something else entirely if you succeed.

May need more poetry, want to finish writing something ;)