New chapter: Hairline Fractures

[limone1]

Title: Hairline Fractures 5

Disclaimer: Bones belong to Reichs, Hanson and Fox

Rating: PG-13

Comments

[fauxmaven]

Ah! Finally. You don't need a lot of words to tell a powerful story. Bravo.

[limone1]

Finally - That she told him or that you've been waiting for it for chapters? I'm going to go with the first one ;)

Thrilled you think the few word thing works, my constant struggle, to use less words. That's my method of re-write, I may only write things once, but I do go back and remove words, my draft to final version process.

[fauxmaven]

Finally - That she told him or that you've been waiting for it for chapters? I'm going to go with the first one ;)

That she told him. I tell you, it's like extracting teeth from a rattlesnake. Look how long it took LSQ. :-)

[limone1]

I'll take your word for the rattlesnake and the teeth, have never tried that...

Thing with stringing things out - it's completely different when you do it yourself as opposed to when others do it. You seem to be able to influence LSQ, if she does it again, lean on her ;)

[sal101010]

I hate cliffhangers! I hope the next chapter comes soon!

[limone1]

But they are so much fun to write! Yes, next chapter soon.

[inspirera]

Ah cliffhanger! I can't wait for Booth's reaction :)

[limone1]

Maybe it's from reading all that Charles Dickens as a child, can't help myself when it comes to cliffhanger ends!

[buffyangellvr23]

come on post more!

[limone1]

Posting is no problem, it's the tiny detail of writing so that there is something to post...

[makd]

aha! Brennan's three hardest words. Neat cliffie.

[limone1]

At least in ff. Most of the time it's Booth ogling/noticing Brennan and confessing. Wanted to see if I could turn things around.