fic: never so safe as i am with you

[linckia_blue]

Title: never so safe as i am with you
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: approx. 6,500
Disclaimer: I do not claim profit or ownership of any recognizable plots/characters.
Summary: Arthur has better subconscious security than anyone in the world. It’s notoriously impossible to steal a secret from him. Unless, of course, you’re Eames.

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Comments

[ainsoph15]

That was absolutely stunning. It was so wonderful to read about all that breathtaking imagery - just beautiful. And the way you wrote the tension between them - GUH. Gorgeous, all of it. This was the bit that just about broke me:

the sheer exhilaration of manipulating Eames’s raw subconscious. Um, wow, that is both hot and heartbreakingly lovely ♥

[pushdragon]

A complete pleasure to read - thank you so much for putting a big grin on my face. Your descriptions of the world changing were especially vivid - in fact both Arthur and Eames's sub-conscious worlds were beautifully described.

[andrealyn]

I absolutely love love love the premise and the idea behind this and it's so unique and executed SO WELL. LOVE IT TO BITS! And the dreamscapes you give here are so so beautiful.

[meiface]

Oh I love this premise - and how well you executed it. :D Gorgeous descriptions of dreamscape, with Eames's birds and then the bridge Arthur builds. Lovely lovely imagery.

[sirona_gs]

LOVE IT SO MUCH.

My favourite bit was Eames' conversation with Cobb, that made me LOL so much! XD

I love the idea of it, and the way you wrote it out was perfect. My only nitpick would be that I think it would benefit from a slightly longer scene after they wake up for the final time, maybe discus things a litte.

But that's just me who didn't want this fic to end! <3