fic: leaving this old fairground behind [2/2]

Nov 15, 2011 00:39

PART TWO OF leaving this old fairground behind

Don't drop that. )

arthur/eames, prompted, fic

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daraq November 17 2011, 01:19:31 UTC
This is fantastic! Thank you!

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placideyes November 17 2011, 02:20:43 UTC
Whoaaa I remember reading the start of this on the kink meme awhile back I think, and being sad that none of the circus au's were completed.

I love everybody here so much. Ariadne doing acrobatics on horseback! Robert horse-whispering (why is that so perfect)! Yusuf as the magician with way too many swords and decorative bottles!

And somehow, my favorite line is “He loves it in there. He was in the safety leathers, anyway. It was only five seconds before I pulled him out. He was all ashy and happy as a clam.” Hahaha Eames did it on purpose and Arthur is happy as a clam in a pit of fire. That is so ridiculous and hilariously endearing to me. *______*

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mrsdstephens November 17 2011, 05:21:05 UTC
God this is just so beautiful. You have an amazing way with language. Your descriptions are so vivid. I feel like I can experience all five senses in every scene. Your characterizations are so beautifully done. I just love your writing and storytelling so, so much.

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just_jane_doe November 21 2011, 03:59:06 UTC
I absolutely loved this. Loved the cadence and feel of this story and am so in love with these characters in this setting - felt dreamy and lovely and I read it through a haze of awe and amazement.

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phenylic November 21 2011, 07:28:22 UTC
oh my god, this was so gorgeous ♥

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