Magnolia Stellata (Kirk/McCoy, PG-13)

Mar 23, 2011 09:34

A little something for my glorious captain sangueuk's birthday. Being smart, deep and badass, she loves sex mixed with philosophy, and so I went and wrote slightly shmoopy angst. Maybe imagining them all with Southern accents will help.

Summary: Jim accompanies Bones to the McCoy annual picnic, which under the circumstances counts as a favor, especially in ( Read more... )

pg-13, kirk/mccoy

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vivid_moment March 23 2011, 21:31:23 UTC
Just love how you wrote our boys so damn much ♥ Even though I wanted to bash their heads together somewhat, OMG!

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lindmere March 25 2011, 02:22:51 UTC
We can all be stupid in love, given enough time, y/y? Glad you enjoyed it!

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vivid_moment March 25 2011, 07:10:20 UTC
LOL, HELL YEAH! ;) <3

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joirerson March 23 2011, 21:38:43 UTC
Gah!!! I almost flipped back to make sure there wasn't a warning for an unhappy ending, but decided to stick it out- and I'm so glad I did! This was lovely, just beautifully done.

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lindmere March 25 2011, 02:23:22 UTC
Oh, I'm sure I would have faced the J/B virtual firing squad with out a semi-happy ending...thanks for seeing it through!

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siluria March 23 2011, 21:44:58 UTC
So painful, and yet beautiful. I love the characterisation all round and the imagery you create. Wonderful!

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lindmere March 25 2011, 02:24:01 UTC
Thank you, friend! I think part of it's my longing for spring...it's almost here, but if I were just a few hundred miles further south...

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sangueuk March 23 2011, 22:56:46 UTC
OH, SWEETIE, THIS HURTS SO GOOD. I'm almost in tears of relief. Seriously, you had me convinced that you were going to break my boys up and that Leo would get back with Joss. *sniffs* But no - it's my birthday and you'd never do that to me, I trusted you. They LOVE EACH OTHER and yeah, nothing else matters.

Bones sort-of moving into, then sort-of moving out of, the captain’s quarters. And, guess what, all they needed to do was bloody talk *sighs*. Oh BOYS! That naked fishing is going to be great for communication.

Thank you, bb, I love you for writing this. I can't wait to re-read it now I know what's going to happen and just savour the way you wrote the setting and the unfolding of their fight. And I could totally hear the southern voices, yes! *squishes* Thank you for this piece of awesome!

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lindmere March 25 2011, 02:25:17 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! You're the one who inspired me to try breaking them up (temporarily, anyway). It hurts, but I think it's realistic given their personalities and all the stress they're under.

Sorry I couldn't fit in any porn. Next time, I promise!

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avictoriangirl March 23 2011, 23:01:54 UTC
Oh, so hurty, but oh so good. ♥

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lindmere March 25 2011, 21:50:09 UTC
Hurray! I'm glad it met with your approval. Every now and then, you have to lob the angst grenade ;)

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