There she was

[b_i_t_t]

Mitch looked at his watch for about the fifth time in as many minutes. He looked longingly at the pack of cigarettes that he knew were in the glove box. It'd been a little over seventy-two hours now since his last cigarette. He drummed his fingers on the steering wheel nervously. Over the stereo system a group of children sung off-key versions

Comments

[bahia]

Nice piece. You really captured a slice of life and show a lot of what likely came before the start of this story, and also get us thinking about what might happen next. Thanks for posting!

[b_i_t_t]

Thanks.