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lipstickcat

Due South fic

Sep 21, 2006 08:39

Title - Heart and Mind
Pairing - Fraser/Kowalski, Fraser/Fraser
Rating - NC-17
Notes -4,250, many thanks to Slidellra for the beta job. Any remaining mistakes are all mine ^_^
Prompt - #2 - “Fraser/Fraser’s right hand - Ray’s on a date, and Fraser’s at the Consulate, thinking about what Ray and his date might be doing.”

( if you are lying to yourself how can you possibly be honest to the rest of the world? )

fanfic, due south

Comments 32

etcetera_cat September 21 2006, 13:42:55 UTC

*faint trails of smoke emanating from both ears*

Well, having my brain short-circuited by beautifully IC Mountie porn during my lunch break, has just made me happy.

lipstickcat September 22 2006, 16:03:23 UTC

Hee! *fans the smoke*

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

(I have 4 out of 5 of the donuts Dief didn't get planned, btw...)

etcetera_cat September 22 2006, 18:20:12 UTC

(I have 4 out of 5 of the donuts Dief didn't get planned, btw...)

*giggles extensively*

mickeymvt September 21 2006, 14:06:30 UTC

Damn Fraser has a good imagination. I hope it is Ray at the door. Or maybe Turnbull, coming to comfort Fraser??

lipstickcat September 22 2006, 16:04:07 UTC

.... Hmmmm... I wonder who it is.... ^_~

lucifercircle September 21 2006, 15:44:12 UTC

Poor Turnbull.
I hope it's Ray at the door. This was very hot.

lipstickcat September 22 2006, 16:04:30 UTC

Thank you kindly ^_^

ruthless1 September 21 2006, 20:16:48 UTC

Once again I am grinning at my computer at work. And once again I am hoping that people just think that I am reading Hollywood entertainment news or some such nonsense. This was quite good and it was hot and very wistful at the same time.

lipstickcat September 22 2006, 16:05:22 UTC

Yay! for reading porn at work and grinning at the computer! Thank you for the feedback ^_^

raggedass_road September 24 2006, 19:59:35 UTC

ARGH! You can't quit there! Okay you CAN, but... and it's beautifully executed too but... ARGH!

I love how the entire thing was show-not-tell, all this intense jealousy and longing without giving it a name, just making us feel it. ooh. Yeah. And the way you handled both the fantasy and reality at the same time, very well done. Fraser has a vivid imagination, doesn't he? heh.

I felt awful for Turnbull though! (Not that I really wanted Fraser to invite him in, but. aw! Renfield!)

Again... I love the ending, but it's also driving me nuts. I'm dying to know if it's Ray at the door, and what Fraser's gonna do if it IS. (Or, alternatively, if it's Turnbull fresh from fantasizing about him.)

lipstickcat September 24 2006, 21:55:54 UTC

Thank you for the wonderful feedback. I'm glad its getting under your skin!

And thanks for friending me ^_^

*pets Ren* I felt so bad writing Turnbull's part, I adore him, (in case that's not obvious), poor thing, I can't help but misuse my favourite muses. Although, you now having me thinking about what would happen if it is him at the door....