Comments | lipstickcat: Due South fic

lipstickcat

Due South fic

Sep 21, 2006 08:39

Title - Heart and Mind
Pairing - Fraser/Kowalski, Fraser/Fraser
Rating - NC-17
Notes -4,250, many thanks to Slidellra for the beta job. Any remaining mistakes are all mine ^_^
Prompt - #2 - “Fraser/Fraser’s right hand - Ray’s on a date, and Fraser’s at the Consulate, thinking about what Ray and his date might be doing.”

( if you are lying to yourself how can you possibly be honest to the rest of the world? )

fanfic, due south

Comments 32

mmmarmalade September 25 2006, 21:44:53 UTC

Is it Ray? Is it Ray? Is it Ray? Please tell me!

Who woulda thunk that the thought of a guy peeling off bright red long underwear would be so insanely hot? And yet it is. Thank you very kindly for that delectable visual. :):):)

lipstickcat September 25 2006, 22:11:26 UTC

It's whoever you want it to be.... ^_~

Thank you for the feedback. Really, Fraser would probably make peeling off a potato sack sexy... Especially if it hadn't been cleaned first and he had smears of dirt over his skin, and that just wouldn't do, so he'd have to go wash it off and then there would just be water making his flesh all shiny and... Mmmm....

....Uh, I have no idea why he'd be wearing a (dirty) potato sack to begin with though.... I really need to get some sleep I think...

skater_g8r September 26 2006, 00:50:15 UTC

so hot and beautiful, I would love a sequel.

lipstickcat September 28 2006, 09:10:12 UTC

Thank you

...I am not thinking about who's at the door and what would happen next, nope, not at all... uh.... ^_~

j_s_cavalcante October 2 2006, 06:32:17 UTC

It MUST be Ray! Oh, please!

Poor Fraser. And poor Turnbull. What a love triangle. Nicely done and very hot.

lipstickcat October 3 2006, 20:47:01 UTC

*smiles* Thank you ^_^

bluebrocade January 28 2007, 23:37:03 UTC

Guh. That last line...*gulp*. It simply MUST be Ray.

lipstickcat March 5 2007, 17:16:13 UTC

*waves and offers a very belated thank you for the feedback*

^_^

spuffyduds March 5 2007, 17:10:19 UTC

LOVE THIS!!! Remarkably steamy and melancholy at the same time, and so well-written. I especially like:

doing whatever it was that he needed to do to his hair to get it to do what it does--

what a wonderfully circular, wonderfully Fraser turn of phrase.

lipstickcat March 5 2007, 17:15:13 UTC

Thank you! That line's my personal favourite ^_^ I agonised for ages about whether to include it or not - just because it makes sense to me, doesn't mean it makes sense to the world...

I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^