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[lissabear02]

Title: Must Admit I've Been Holding Back
Pairing: Zayn/Niall
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Zayn doesn’t want him to back off, is the thing. He wants to find a corner and shove Niall into it, get him to do the opposite of backing off. Zayn knows it’s a terrible idea, but he can’t seem to get rid of it.
Author's Notes: Thanks to fiddleyoumust for the quick once

Comments

[urgencytobleed]

this was really sweet and just cute and enjoyable. great job.

[oanja]

Ooh, new fic! \0/

Pining fic is always good, especially with Zayn. Somehow he has that pining air about him, idk, don't ask, I'm not making any sense. But the point was supposed to be that this story was super cute and adorable, Niall was a smooth bastard and Zayn continues to be my favourite thing. =)

[lissa_bear]

He's my favorite thing, too! Even if Niall is trying to take over my life.

Thanks, friend! ♥

[estrella30]

oh god, I LOVE THIS. I was never really into niall in fic but lately he's been growing on my and your zayn is ALWAYS so awesome and ugh. SO GOOD. love it. you are the best, lady!!

[lissa_bear]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! Niall wins everyone over eventually, I think. You've seen that graph, right? Of the progression of One Direction fandom? And it ends with, like, "NIALL?!?!?" or something? Accurate.

[ingeneva]

This is wonderful. I love how you captured their comfortable lack of boundaries -- Harry grabbing his dick, Niall's hand on his thigh. It sets up a nice contrast to how aware Zayn is of where there is a line to cross and how he doesn't expect Niall to meet him (I esp. liked this: He bites his lip, huffs out a frustrated little laugh. / “Did Harry put you up to this?”). And I love how stupid it makes Zayn (“Kiss me back already,” Niall complains, nipping at Zayn’s jaw, and right. was my absolute favorite bit). Darling, this is.

[lissa_bear]

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it!

[certainthings]

So many warm fuzzy feelings.

[lissa_bear]

ILU!