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Jun 30, 2012 15:42

Title: Must Admit I've Been Holding Back
Pairing: Zayn/Niall
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Zayn doesn’t want him to back off, is the thing. He wants to find a corner and shove Niall into it, get him to do the opposite of backing off. Zayn knows it’s a terrible idea, but he can’t seem to get rid of it.
Author's Notes: Thanks to fiddleyoumust for the quick once ( Read more... )

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estrella30 June 30 2012, 22:56:29 UTC
(when you get a chance also can you shoot me your email addy? or email me at tress30@gmail.com? I have to ask you something :D )

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numara June 30 2012, 23:08:21 UTC
ughgh this was so good and sweet and my feels really can't handle all of this right now. your voice for zayn is always perfect and honestly, i'm waiting patiently for the day you decide to write some zayn-centric ot5 fic. <3

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lissa_bear July 1 2012, 04:07:56 UTC
I'd write ot5 if I thought I could. It's just a lot of characterization to get right!

Thank you so much for your lovely comment! ♥

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lissa_bear July 1 2012, 04:10:52 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such a lovely comment!

damn the torpedoes, as he is wont to do.

I feel like this is Niall in a nutshell. Perfect.

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badjujuboo July 1 2012, 00:24:48 UTC
LET ME PASS OUT NOW! oh wow, the UST in this was perfect and drunk!zayn and teasing!harry are absolutely win! Love Niall figuring it out virtually on stage and being the adorable boy that he is! love love love!

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lissa_bear July 1 2012, 04:11:57 UTC
Thank you!!! So glad you liked it!

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darelose July 1 2012, 01:27:19 UTC
Oh, this is really sweet. Pining! And kissing! And Niall being the initiator of said kissing which is something I really, really love. I like the bit about Zayn flirting with Liam because it felt safe and comfortable, and how he's not sure how Niall would react if Zayn did the same with him.

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lissa_bear July 1 2012, 04:13:29 UTC
I want so much more fic where Niall initiates the kissing or what have you. Because I feel like so much of the Niall fic out there is ot5 gangbangs where Niall just lies back and takes it, which I'm not a fan of, tbh. /o\

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

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