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literrie

A Little Voice Told Me

Jul 07, 2010 22:38

hyukmin (!psychotic min), 3458 words
PG, romance/suspense/angst
Sungmin is a ruthless serial killer-- and then he meets someone he is unable to murder.

Prequel to Dirty Little Secret!

( Truthfully, Sungmin hates the world, and does not actually want to make it a better place. Sungmin kills so that he can get rid of the voice in his head, even if it is just for a little while. )

gen: suspense, super junior, pairing: eunhyuk/sungmin, gen: angst, gen: romance, character: sungmin, character: eunhyuk

Comments 44

eundaesi July 17 2010, 04:56:58 UTC

VOICE!!!!!!! YOU BASTARD!!!!!!
poor Minnie....
poor Hyukkie....

literrie July 18 2010, 03:34:35 UTC

Yeah I hate the voice too ):
thank you for reading♥

torriee July 17 2010, 11:15:25 UTC

it's awesome point of view!!!!
i just wish he didn't kill himself, but he had to.. =(

literrie July 18 2010, 03:35:19 UTC

thank you <3
I wish he didn't have to kill himself too, Hyukmin should not be broken ):

elfrulezforever July 17 2010, 13:43:20 UTC

YOU VOICE I HATE YOU!!!
AND I THOUGHT YOU WILL ENDED IT LIKE THE VOICE DISAPPEAR BECAUSE OF SUNGMIN AND EUNHYUK STRONG LOVE...STUPID VOICE!

literrie July 18 2010, 03:36:06 UTC

I hate the voice too.
Sorry I killed off Sungmin in the end, bb. Thanks for reading ♥

dandanfung July 17 2010, 19:39:44 UTC

Ahh the ending was left ambiguous and it made it all that better.

First time I read it, I thought Min had killed Hyuk, but then I re-read it later and I realized that Min chose to end his own life.

This was brilliant, it didn't have the cliches about 'love overcoming everything' and 'everything ends happily'. Your portrayal of the voice was excellent, it felt insanely real and it worked wonderfully with your Sungmin. The last bit where you wrote that Sungmin starts crying for the first time in ages really reflects on Sungmin's ongoing turmoil, a fraction of his struggle that you've portrayed in writing. It was so brilliant.

Excellent read. Really made my day a lot better. <3

dandanfung July 17 2010, 19:42:20 UTC

You also wrote from Min's POV, but it had a limited portrayal of what was given to the readers, and it escalataed the entire piece because we were kept in suspense.

The bit you gave about Min being his boyfriend and how things looked hopeful at one moment, and then you crushed us with the point-blank request that Min has to kill Hyuk. Brilliant. Absolutely brillianttt. <333

And I smiled at Min flailing himself at Hyuk when he asked him to be his boyfriend.

literrie July 18 2010, 03:43:09 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH ♥♥♥

I'm glad I made your day better! Thank you for reading so deeply into this, and liking it so much. *hugs*

I love Hyukmin, I think they are ridiculously cute together (: I'm sorry I made both of them so sad in this,though. But love doesn't always work out, right?

Anyway, thank you again ♥

imhappi July 18 2010, 01:19:19 UTC

omg...*cries*

so sad T^T poor min

literrie July 18 2010, 03:43:57 UTC

I'm sorry I made you cry ):
Yeah, poor Minnie! T.T
Thank you for reading<3