Comments | little_bibelot: "Paper Crown" [3/20]

little_bibelot

"Paper Crown" [3/20]

Apr 30, 2009 18:24

Title: Paper Crown [3/20]
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho, Yoochun/Junsu
Genre: AU, drama/romance
Warnings: None
Summary: Sequel to Music Is My Life. It's early 2009 and Jaejoong finds himself forced to entertain a certain businessman with no intention of leaving until he finds what he's looking for.

( You could have died! Do you even know what that means? )

dbsk, au, multi-chaptered, paper crown

Comments 48

hybridchickens April 30 2009, 23:18:47 UTC

YAY FOR UPDATES! SPOT. :DD

hybridchickens April 30 2009, 23:41:35 UTC

ohmygosh, yunho what are you doing to yourself?? DD:
i find this chapter very sad, a sort of deeper sadness that doesn't bring out the tears, if that makes sense at all. i hope jae comes soon (:DD) and they can be jaeho and happy together. <-- LOL, oversimplification if there ever was one.

i really liked these sentences, even if they're not that important to the story:

Meanwhile he felt his body manhandled in the skilful way most doctors thought was unobtrusive

and

Her maturity surprised him, as did her naiveté.

♥

little_bibelot May 1 2009, 06:19:44 UTC

Don't worry, things will get better starting w/ the next chapter ^o^ I was definitely going for a more melancholic, sombre mood with this chapter instead of angst. Things will start moving at a quicker pace soon so please be patient :)

You have a skill for picking out some of my fav sentences 8D ♥ Thanks for reading~

hybridchickens May 1 2009, 22:15:17 UTC

yes. i will be patient because good things are worth waiting for. :DD

You have a skill for picking out some of my fav sentences
really? wow, i'm *happy dance* 8DD

♥

neitoperhonen April 30 2009, 23:23:40 UTC

Ahh, I read this before and I didn't know what to comment. This chapter kind of wiped my brain leaving it all blank -.-;; I think that's a good thing but I never know of my brain

little_bibelot May 1 2009, 06:20:11 UTC

That's alright =) Thanks for reading!

oda_chan April 30 2009, 23:27:52 UTC

OMG YES!! Update! :D
Kekeke, Junsu knows the place for relaxing? May it be.. you-know-who? XD
That sounded weird.
But seriously, update fast! I want Jaejoong! I want Jaeho! I'm hooked!
Haha, update soon! Fighting~!

little_bibelot May 1 2009, 06:22:51 UTC

^_^ You're probably thinking of the right place (not that I made it much of a mystery!) I'll write whenever I can - exams are killing me :( Stifling my artistic spirit! Thanks for the comment though, they're a huge encouragement for me~ ♥

kakkobean May 1 2009, 00:46:07 UTC

ACK!!! *flails* Yunho's driving himself into more of a corner, and Jihye's talk about selling the company--holy crap! It's like Jaejoong's words were a curse more than idle conversation *flails*

little_bibelot May 1 2009, 06:23:53 UTC

When I wrote MIML I didn't have PC in mind but I definitely had what he said in mind while I planned this story out. It'll be like everything going full circle ;D I'm glad you noticed that. Thanks for reading!

kakkobean May 1 2009, 06:41:40 UTC

*flails* Look forward to reading more! 8DD

moon1084 May 1 2009, 00:52:02 UTC

i will be back!

little_bibelot May 1 2009, 06:24:03 UTC

^_^b Okay~

moon1084 May 1 2009, 13:50:17 UTC

waaah! yunho why are u doing this to yourself?!? now u are stuck in the hospital see! jaejoong come rescue ur yunho man! great chap sweety! i love how you describe everything. yoosu are such good friends to him and jihye she is adorable taking care of her big bro like that