"In Our Room" [1/1]

[little_bibelot]

Title: In Our Room [1/1]
Pairing: Jonghyun/Minho
Genre: AU, drama/romance
Warnings: None
Words: 8193
Summary: So maybe Jonghyun shouldn't treat the room as his own anymore. Sharing is caring, after all.

Comments

[little_bibelot]

Thanks! I'm glad to hear it ^^

[scylladakylla]

Oh, I LOVE. ♥

I love the progression of Jongho's relationship (or, maybe, lack thereof until near the end, anyway), and the way the tension between them was always there, especially after Jonghyun sees Minho kissing a guy, but Jonghyun doesn't notice. And the inclusion of Jessica as Jonghyun's friend and crush! Your Minho and Jonghyun were perfect, with Minho's need for alone time and Jonghyun being kind of an ass sometimes and Minho's love for soccer and Jonghyun's love for music and all of it. :3

Was Jessica dating Seohyun? Or maybe Tiffany? And who was Minho kissing?

This was really, really lovely. The pacing and the narration and the tone and the details, all of it. ♥

[little_bibelot]

X3 You noticed all the little things I threw in there~ I was seriously worried about characterization because I'm still fairly new to SHINee and kind of threw myself into writing this when inspiration hit but you've quelled some of my worries. Thank you so much~~ ♥ I'm glad the JongHo worked for you ;)

I had Tiffany in mind (!!! Great minds think alike!) since I mentioned vocal class, but now that I think about it I might have been hinting at a little SeoSica there too X3; Minho was kissing Nickhun but it didn't really work if I identified him so I kept him anon. Let's just say that relationship didn't work out~

Thank again, your kind words mean a lot!

[yummyfruit]

oh gosh.
that was such a good one shot to read.

The way jonghyun and minho met met is hilarious and totally embarrasing.
gosh i didnt know guys actually do that often.

Minho and Jonghyun's love and hate relationship in the beginning was really funny.
So i assume that Jonghyun told Minho 'yes' right?
did minho have a fight with his dad or something?

hm wow.
Usually, minhoXjonghyun is okay
but in this one shot
they're like greattt
like i really really love this oneshot lol
you made me like minho X jonghyun pairing.

aww i really want a sequal to this.

This one shot must of taken a while to write.

jessica's hairflipping sounds so cute lol.

and that soccer piggy bank thing, i want one too! lol.

[little_bibelot]

!!! I'm so happy you liked it~ :)

Well I wouldn't know since I'm not a guy but I figured it would make for a great scene! ;)

Indeed, Jonghyun told Minho yes~~ He was too embarrassed to say it aloud. I'm sure something bad must've happened between Minho and his dad...or Minho might have decided to move out because he couldn't face his dad because of his homosexuality. Either way, it's up to your imagination~

I'm always delighted when I hear readers tell me how I helped them enjoy a pairing they normally wouldn't. X)

Idk if a sequel is forthcoming but if inspiration hits again I'll definitely write it XD Now that I think about it, I want a piggy bank like that too! hehe ♥ Thank you for the lovely comment!

[yummyfruit]

yeah i really like this pairing now.
And i love that your one shot was really long.
to be honest, i was getting sick of one shots that were only like a 100 words long.

do you have other one shots?

[little_bibelot]

On the contrary it's very difficult for me to write drabbles because I don't feel as though I can convey what I want in such a short piece. I can see from your LJ that you like DBSK ^^ Most of my one-shots are DBSK centered, you can check the first post in my journal for my masterlist. Thanks for your interest :3

[drugsex]

oh wow i kind of adore this. :')

[little_bibelot]

Thank you :3

[little_bibelot]

LOL I suppose they are ^^ Thanks for reading!