Pirates you say ? Thats better than gypsies. Lol jk ! Hey, thanks for commenting on my post. Its actually the beggining to a novel I hope to someday write. Thanks for the critisisms. I find it hard though, to find where to put detail, and then where to leave it out. I liked your way of explaining her going to the marijuana in the drawer. I also find it difficult to describe characters, then where to put the description. Thanks again for the help, its much appreciated !
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