The Breaking Point

[littlebadlei]

Title: The Breaking Point
Pairing(s): Ohmiya
Rated: PG-13
Genre: Romance, drama, angst, self-harming
Summary: "Why do I feel this way? Why can't I just be happy?"

Note: hi, i'm new at writing fics, so i'm sorry if there are some mistakes! english is not my native language
Big hug and kisses to sho_nyan ! thank you for helping me x3

Comments

[keshichan]

I know that there were some mistakes but I'm not commenting on those.
I loved it and it actually made me cry. ;A;

[littlebadlei]

thank you! and yes.. it's sad..

[coolohoh]

so touching T.T

[littlebadlei]

thanks for reading :)

[oneterrorist]

Why would you write this!!

Though I really liked that it was first person point of view.

[littlebadlei]

why? .......... i don't know, it was more like i had to write it, since it just came to my head :D

you did? awww x3x should i thank you? XD

[oneterrorist]

yup, quick! write it before the inspiration runs out D:
You won't be writing more fics? Or was this the only exception (and the sakumoto one)?

yes yes, you're welcome u.u
No but seriously, I can't write first person point of view even if my life depended on it. I would like to try it someday, but today is not the day. Besides, since it's arashi, I would spend too much time trying to think the way they think and no, I can't do that. I find them to be too unexpected and can never figure out why they do some of the things they do.

[littlebadlei]

ahahaha xD
yeah it is! in the middle i was starting to write in different point of view but the i remembered how i was writing xD it's much easier to write it the other way... well when i'm writing about someone i have created or something... it's easier to write this way :D

well... this was my second fic... i have wrote some stories, but.... they are bad or not finished xD

[pamu13]

Aw. So sad. TvT
Well, I guess I shouldve known from the title, but still. D:

And i wasnt expecting the suicide at all, I literally gasped, as soon as the words razor blade came out. Im like NOOOOOO NINO! DONT DO IT! ;3;

But he still did it, and i was also shocked to know that, that wasnt the first time he did that. DX Aww. Poor nino. what took ohno so long. ;3;

Imma read the next part. >3>

[shoyuko_audris]

No to the o, NO! Mama you didn't just! Noooooooooo......l NO NO NO NO NO, IGNORING EVERYTHING I HAVE READ AND GOING TO FIND FLUFF.....
mama dont you love ohmiya!? Why make them suffer! Sobs sobs sobs! Nino you dumbo! 1 hour is still short! Especially since Satoshi can't drive., baaahh *flips a table*

[littlebadlei]

AHAHAH XD
yes, i do, i love ohmiya :3
and why? ummm i have no idea :D