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littlestarling

Daddy Winchester AU Fic: As Silver Refined

Oct 02, 2007 19:27

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nocturnal08 October 3 2007, 21:56:48 UTC

OMG!!! I couldn't stop smiling! *g*

This is SO fun so far.

That smart ass smile coupled with a "mr. winchester!" babe you don't know what you're doing to me!

I love Dean being loose and John being all gruff when we know the boy's got him totally wrapped around his little finger.

And a cliff hanger! Very naughty... Looking forward to more!!

yep, still smiling. *g*

littlestarling October 3 2007, 22:03:07 UTC

sorry no spanking yet. next chapter.

awesome! suprnaturalgirl October 3 2007, 23:26:55 UTC

I think i'm going to fall in love with this story! You're such a great writer! I can't wait for more!

Sumer :-)

Re: awesome! littlestarling October 4 2007, 22:48:20 UTC

Thanks Sumer. I'll try not to disappoint!

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thevulgarvirgin October 4 2007, 01:43:44 UTC

I just had a small heart attack!

OMG! OMG! Oh Mah GAWD! dfndgjfskkldf

I'm ridiculously excited, can you tell?!

Very interesting to see John's opinion of Dean when he's not his kid, they're hunting together, Dean's got his cocky attitude, John wants to take care of him...I have no words, you're a genius!

::pokes you to write more..NOW::

littlestarling October 4 2007, 04:20:17 UTC

I am writing more right now! Stop poking me or Dean's going to get 4 spankings instead of 3!

thevulgarvirgin October 4 2007, 04:25:30 UTC

::pooooooooooooooooookes:: like that's supposed to be incentive ta stop?!

tabaqui October 4 2007, 02:34:37 UTC

Innnnnnteresting! A non-related John/Dean i can get behind. :)
I want to know what next!
:)

littlestarling October 4 2007, 11:00:44 UTC

Thanks! I wanted them all to see one another with fresh eyes!

astrangerfate October 4 2007, 03:05:08 UTC

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, I want to put an inordinate amount of squeeing here and I'm trying to suppress it but eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkk!

I bet you can guess my favorite parts, but I'll include them anyway.

At worst he was a danger slut who needed his freckled ass beaten on a regular basis because he didn't know how to do what he was told.

and this was SO great:

"Thought it'd be better for my ass if I didn't."

John leaned forward, and Dean leaned back.

Damned kid was getting real good at gauging his moods.

Because, yummy!

Your characters are so perfect for an AU fic and I want spanking and sexing, nownownow!

I soooo can't wait for the weekend!

littlestarling October 4 2007, 11:01:31 UTC

spanking and sexin's my favorite part too!

astrangerfate October 4 2007, 11:37:49 UTC

Hmm, okay, now that I've (sort of) gotten over the spanking threats I have to point out some other things I like.

1) Dean ordering such a huge breakfast! What a lovely bratty kid!!

2) John was Dean's teacher? OMG that has to be the hottest backstory ever and I wanna read it!!! (Come on, the student/teacher relationships are SO hot and pervy! And you can use rulers and paddles!)

Just eek! I love you! (And I'm stealing your JDM icon again!)

hucknclem October 4 2007, 04:43:48 UTC

OMG!!! I just LOVE this, love seeing John's take on Dean from this perspective, love the two of them together and the dynamic you're building, and you just gave me the best reason ever to look forward to a crappy weekend! *Makes you jump up and down with me* You? Are awesome!! :)