(Series) Seize The Day (1/?)

Nov 23, 2008 17:40

Title: Seize The Day (1/?)
Pairings: Yabujin (hinted, friendship), Pin (friendship), KoyaRyo (implied)
Genre: Friendship/slight angst/possible romance
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Owning them would be like owning slaves. Illegal.
Series Summary: Jin searches. Yabu waits.

Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling... )

pairing: yabu x jin, fanfiction, series: seize the day

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anilee0510 November 23 2008, 23:31:41 UTC
First?

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anilee0510 November 23 2008, 23:34:26 UTC
YES!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

AND I READ THE WHOLE THING BEFORE COMMENTING TOO!!!!

LOL, so amusing. *reading fics as a break from AP bio study*

I totally LMAO-ed at Hikaru's voicemail. And Jin's ringtones are just plain weird...I wish I could set separate ringtones on my phone too!!! T___T

And OMG, I love Ryo. XDDD So sharp-tongued, it's hilarious. Jin + fangirls? Is he gonna get...mobbed to death? *sadistic laughter*

*refreshes*

O.o What happened to the next's?

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live4dehmoment November 27 2008, 21:50:46 UTC
Lolx, HIGH FIVE!
0_0, Ani's showing restraint? WHAT IS THIS NONSENSE?
XDDDDDD, I do the same thing....except I read fics as a break from EVERYTHING (...including as a break from TAKING a break, -.-)
^_^, glad you liked it. It's my voicemail actually, it's a joke between a couple of my friends and I. Ha, I wish I could set separate ringtones on my phone too...I know a couple people who can do it and I see it on TV all the time.
Haha, Ryo-chan will always be my favorite meanie, he's too funny to write. Lolx, you never know, maybe he WILL get mobbed to death (he is SEMI popular...).
Oh yeah, I put those in by accident and then I took them off. You must have been reading it when I took it off, ^_^, sorry!

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anilee0510 November 28 2008, 01:20:53 UTC
RESTRAINT?! WHAT RESTRAINT?! *panics* OH NOES!!! MY REPUTATION AS THE SADIST IS DYING??? O___________O

XDDDDDDDDD I sometimes go to fics as a way of running away from reality...but now I'm also running away from my own fics!!!!!! OTL

*hopes for a mobbing*

LOL I see. XDD BWAHAHAHA!! I GOTS SPOILED!!!!!!!

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knowmonsta November 23 2008, 23:35:46 UTC
I love Hika's ringtone. :)

And RyoJin was hilarious!

“What did you see, Jin? What the hell did you see in Yabu Kota’s eyes?”

Cracks, Pi, Jin thought, leaning back on the train seat. Millions of cracks.

“He’s breaking, Pi.”

I LOVED THAT PART. XD It was so nicely written.

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

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live4dehmoment November 27 2008, 21:55:41 UTC
Hehe, I like Hika's voicemail too. ^_^, that's why it's my voicemail!
Awww, thanks, I'm glad you liked it! THANKS FOR FINISHING THE YABUJIN STORY YOU DID (Haha, finally gave me the courage to write one of my own, XD).

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aeri_s November 23 2008, 23:39:35 UTC
I /envy/ the way you write dialogue so, so, so much.

Uhn, a few things I noticed
1) I'm not certain what the "J" above the line "Why was he doing this?" is doing XD
2) “The girls already saw you, aren’t they?” "aren't they" should be "haven't they" or...something of the sort XD

I loved the way you interspersed the past with Jin's current thoughts, I loved the way you ended that scene.

And I just /laughed/ at the phone call w/ Ryo and Koyama XD

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live4dehmoment November 27 2008, 21:54:24 UTC
Awww, thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
And thanks for noting the mistakes...I was editing the chapter while I put it into HTML coding and I must have missed some of the stuff. Thanks for noticing!

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karmoisin November 23 2008, 23:53:56 UTC
+SQUEEEEEE+ I was about to go sleep and then I see this on my f-list!!!!!

I LOVE JIN'S RINGTONE FOR RYO. LOL. And the implied KoyaRyo is CUTE.

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. XD

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live4dehmoment November 27 2008, 21:56:58 UTC
Lolx, glad to make your night!
^_^, I totally wish that I could do separate ringtones for people, that'd be awesome. And yeah, KoyaRyo is seriously my all-time fav little-seen pairing (it's my mission in life to pimp them to the point of Akame-dom).
Awww, thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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ssm_kiyumi November 24 2008, 00:07:22 UTC
D: I'm not first.
Why'd ou post this already?
I was hoping to save it for next week..

btw, my friend's been trying to get me to watch house forever, but I refuse to. and I have jap class when it airs, anyways.

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live4dehmoment November 27 2008, 21:58:51 UTC
Awww, sorry, kiddo, I kind of felt like putting it up early + I'm not sure whether or not I hve all that much time this week (I'm really sick and really dragged down by college apps). And if I do have the time, I kind of want to move FORWARD with the story, not just put up something I already wrote (then I didn't actually WRITE anything this week).
Thanks for your help though!
Lolx, excuses, excuses...there's a REASON for TIVO. (and they have the episodes online...YOU CAN'T HIDE FROM HOUSE, LITTLE MISS)

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ssm_kiyumi November 27 2008, 22:27:53 UTC
Oh okay. No problem.
Actually, a couple of my friends are applying to US universities, and they're just as bad off. It's so much easier here; you just get the marks, then to the website and check off the schools you wanna apply to.
LOL. I'm still not going to watch it.

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live4dehmoment November 30 2008, 16:21:19 UTC
>____________________>, I HATE US UNIVERSITIES. HATE THEM. HATE THEM. HATE THEM. WHAT I WOULDN'T GIVE TO BE GOING TO SCHOOL OVERSEAS.
Lolx, I'll get you to watch it someday, just you wait and see!

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