Title: Seize The Day (1/?)
Pairings: Yabujin (hinted, friendship), Pin (friendship), KoyaRyo (implied)
Genre: Friendship/slight angst/possible romance
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Owning them would be like owning slaves. Illegal.
Series Summary: Jin searches. Yabu waits.
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Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling... )
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AND I READ THE WHOLE THING BEFORE COMMENTING TOO!!!!
LOL, so amusing. *reading fics as a break from AP bio study*
I totally LMAO-ed at Hikaru's voicemail. And Jin's ringtones are just plain weird...I wish I could set separate ringtones on my phone too!!! T___T
And OMG, I love Ryo. XDDD So sharp-tongued, it's hilarious. Jin + fangirls? Is he gonna get...mobbed to death? *sadistic laughter*
*refreshes*
O.o What happened to the next's?
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0_0, Ani's showing restraint? WHAT IS THIS NONSENSE?
XDDDDDD, I do the same thing....except I read fics as a break from EVERYTHING (...including as a break from TAKING a break, -.-)
^_^, glad you liked it. It's my voicemail actually, it's a joke between a couple of my friends and I. Ha, I wish I could set separate ringtones on my phone too...I know a couple people who can do it and I see it on TV all the time.
Haha, Ryo-chan will always be my favorite meanie, he's too funny to write. Lolx, you never know, maybe he WILL get mobbed to death (he is SEMI popular...).
Oh yeah, I put those in by accident and then I took them off. You must have been reading it when I took it off, ^_^, sorry!
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XDDDDDDDDD I sometimes go to fics as a way of running away from reality...but now I'm also running away from my own fics!!!!!! OTL
*hopes for a mobbing*
LOL I see. XDD BWAHAHAHA!! I GOTS SPOILED!!!!!!!
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And RyoJin was hilarious!
“What did you see, Jin? What the hell did you see in Yabu Kota’s eyes?”
Cracks, Pi, Jin thought, leaning back on the train seat. Millions of cracks.
“He’s breaking, Pi.”
I LOVED THAT PART. XD It was so nicely written.
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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Awww, thanks, I'm glad you liked it! THANKS FOR FINISHING THE YABUJIN STORY YOU DID (Haha, finally gave me the courage to write one of my own, XD).
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Uhn, a few things I noticed
1) I'm not certain what the "J" above the line "Why was he doing this?" is doing XD
2) “The girls already saw you, aren’t they?” "aren't they" should be "haven't they" or...something of the sort XD
I loved the way you interspersed the past with Jin's current thoughts, I loved the way you ended that scene.
And I just /laughed/ at the phone call w/ Ryo and Koyama XD
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And thanks for noting the mistakes...I was editing the chapter while I put it into HTML coding and I must have missed some of the stuff. Thanks for noticing!
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I LOVE JIN'S RINGTONE FOR RYO. LOL. And the implied KoyaRyo is CUTE.
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. XD
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^_^, I totally wish that I could do separate ringtones for people, that'd be awesome. And yeah, KoyaRyo is seriously my all-time fav little-seen pairing (it's my mission in life to pimp them to the point of Akame-dom).
Awww, thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
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Why'd ou post this already?
I was hoping to save it for next week..
btw, my friend's been trying to get me to watch house forever, but I refuse to. and I have jap class when it airs, anyways.
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Thanks for your help though!
Lolx, excuses, excuses...there's a REASON for TIVO. (and they have the episodes online...YOU CAN'T HIDE FROM HOUSE, LITTLE MISS)
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Actually, a couple of my friends are applying to US universities, and they're just as bad off. It's so much easier here; you just get the marks, then to the website and check off the schools you wanna apply to.
LOL. I'm still not going to watch it.
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Lolx, I'll get you to watch it someday, just you wait and see!
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