Fic: Moments of Remembrance

Aug 22, 2011 11:21

Title: Moments of Remembrance
Author: Livia_Carica
Rating: PG
Pairing J/S
Word count: 750 -- ish
Summary: The last of the retirement trilogy. Other parts: Moments of Clarity and Moments of Loss. Like those, this is a bit sad.

John never remembers the little things anymore, but in retrospect that doesn't matter, not really.

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a wee bit o' angst for your troubles, fic, john, sherlock

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lucybun August 22 2011, 18:29:21 UTC
FIRST! This is so gorgeous that I can hardly stand it. It should be painfully sad, and it does stir feelings of sadness, but not to the point that one might think... and that's the beauty of it. You really do convey the sense that things have simply come full circle for them. Comparing John's forgetfulness and distraction to Sherlock's in their earlier years really takes the edge off of the pain. You know they can live like that, with one partner in that state, and still be happy. I think this is the best thing you've ever written.

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livia_carica August 30 2011, 02:38:34 UTC
Thank you, poppet. You made me blush a bit :) I think that they're going to be alright for the time being too. I like to think of Sherlock raging against the forces of nature on the inside, but he'd be so gentle with his John.

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trillsabells August 22 2011, 18:34:18 UTC
Oh my heart...

Not sure there's much else I can say. This is a rather sweet part actually. But still... my heart...

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livia_carica August 30 2011, 02:39:00 UTC
Thank you :) I'm glad you thought it was sweet. I just couldn't leave them hanging after the last part.... :)

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livia_carica August 30 2011, 02:39:47 UTC
Atlin's right; that icon for some reason made me all sad! But I hope it's more sweet than bitter; I wanted to give them a little bit of hope...

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fanbot August 22 2011, 18:49:28 UTC
*sniffle*
This trilogy is delightful to me. We all should hope to have a Sherlock in our old age.

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livia_carica August 30 2011, 02:40:10 UTC
Thank you!

I'd like one now, but I'll take one in my old age too :)

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livia_carica August 30 2011, 02:40:38 UTC
Apparently I did. I feel the need to throw a journal cocktail party to cheer up the people who come here XD

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