LJ Idol: Week 1 - Jayus

[livsnjutare]

Jayus I heard you were getting married, so of course I had to poke around

Comments

[snarkerdoodle]

This was wonderfully done. I liked how the creepiness of the beginning didn't turn out to be just a random stalker person. :)

[itsjustc]

This was really well written. I liked the build up you used through out the piece.

[kandigurl]

Based on your description of your ex, I actually feel sorry for Mary! You deserve better!

I enjoyed this emotional roller coaster.

[beautyofgrey]

A little vengeance is always nice, I think....

[kshandra]

Ow.