the sun that revolves around the earth

Apr 20, 2014 18:04


the sun that revolves around the earth
chanyeol/sehun - pg13
How exactly do you watch someone die in front of you?

for this prompt @ exopromptmeme
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pairing: chanyeol/sehun, exo

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choreong April 22 2014, 01:01:21 UTC
hello!! omfg thank you so much for filling my prompt!!! wow tbh i really wasn't expecting anyone to fill it yet here i am with two incredible fills. :--)))

this was beautifully written oh my lord i had to stop every few minutes to grab at my heart. ;; i really loved how the story progressed- i knew something was up when chanyeol wanted to go on the roller coaster "at least once" and even though his condition wasn't said physically, the way it lingered was just ugh.

i think my favorite part was sehun singing to chanyeol on the bed and that little kiss he gave him when he sang the last line omfg be still heart :c

AND CHANYEOL'S BIRTHDAY PRESENT TO SEHUN WOWOWOWWOWOWOWWW LET ME JUST CURL UP IN A CORNER AND CRY MY EYES OUT DON'T TOUCH ME

i'm left with a bittersweet feeling in my heart.

i can't thank you enough for filling my prompt!!!!
hope you have a good day/night AND I HOPE YOU ACE YOUR FINALS!!!!! :^)

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lizzyu April 22 2014, 14:55:27 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it! :D
I was worried with the direction that I went with it and how I tried to make Chanyeol's illness so abstract

Please don't cry
and have a good day too (:

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vvipforseungri April 30 2014, 23:24:06 UTC
this messed me up a lot. it was written beautifully and i am not sure whether or not i appreciate the fact that i cried.

four times around the sun also messes me up a lot, so maybe that was a factor as well haha

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lizzyu May 1 2014, 16:46:08 UTC
can i be a sadist and say that i'm happy you cried?
i got really emotional when i was writing the second half of this ficlet, so i'm glad that readers actually manages to feel the same way as i do even though the reasons might be completely different.

i love nell so so much though i get depressed listening to their songs at times haha
thank you for this comment; it means a lot to me (:

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jellieeh July 10 2014, 02:52:36 UTC
I love this too much i'm at a loss for words TTATT

you wrote it so beautifully and heart wrenchingly i don't know how to feel about you istg

Please write more of the adorable relationship between chanhun pleaseee!!!

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lizzyu July 16 2014, 13:54:43 UTC
thank you for liking this ♥♥
yes, i'll write more about chanhun, i love them way too much

i don't know how to feel about you istg
please think of me positively!

... )

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mozaorev July 1 2015, 04:01:31 UTC
ohmyyyyyy freaking nice god this is so freaking nicely heartbreaking i thought i couldnt live anymore.
the way the story goes is just ugh. had been reading this for the past few days for like hundredth times????? and the part when sehun's singing is just ugh.

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