there is no what if, only endings and consequences

[lizzyu]

there is no what if, only endings and consequences
chanhun - pg13
what if "wings" never existed?

A/N: title translated from a poster in a shop. story slightly inspired by the original wordings too.
set in the same au as when you smile, your world disappears. no correlation whatsoever though

Comments

[cuddlehun]

wow, okay let me collect myself before i start on a nonsensical tangent on how amazing this was.

ok nope not happeniNG OMG THIS WAS G REAT I CA NNOT EVEN T HE PAIN IN M Y KOKOR O SEHUNNN

it's really refreshing to read different ideas on alternate universes and i find myself liking ones with a more bittersweet ending
the notion of wings was brilliant and the way you described the emotions and the receding feeling to feel them was so accurate it made me do stupid self-restraint on my face to keep me from crying ;;AAAA;;
but ugh chanhun was precious while it lasted
thank you so much for writing this!

/whispers but you killed sehunnie no no unacceptable

[lizzyu]

thank you for your comment!
i'm really glad that you liked this au since its one of my personal favorite too (even though i think there's still lots of room for improvement on my part)

i'm sorry for killing sehunnie, but i can't really envision a happy ending in this situation
i tried to hint about how sehun will not be able to adapt to the change, but i guess nothing can prepare readers for his death.

thank you for reading & liking this. your comment made me real happy! (:

[cuddlehun]

your comment made me real happy! (:

daww you're welcome, dear!
this is a beautiful piece of chanhun and tbh i've been craving for a bit of chanhun in my withered life Q////u////Q

[lizzyu]

AIK i'm so honored.

i really wanted to emphasize on the stark contrast before and after "wings" and i'm glad that it is somewhat conveyed properly.

thank you for this nice comment, it made me happy (:

[seyeol]

WHYYYYY OH MY GOD.
i think i broke myself

This is so beautiful, and SAD. WHY.
But thank you for writing this and SEYEOL ;A;

[lizzyu]