New fic- Fraser/rayK

Aug 22, 2008 23:58


Author: llassah
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: R
Length: 1665
Notes: Sometimes, Ray just needs to be told to stop.

The first time is during the heatwave. He taps along to his heartbeat, rubs his neck, fingers coming off slick with sweat, worries at his lower lip, the thrumming itch under his skin more than he can bear.

“Stop,” ( Read more... )

fic, due south, slash

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keerawa August 23 2008, 00:26:03 UTC
Oh, yes. Then he gets a sharpie from his nightstand drawer, writes ‘stop’ high up on his left thigh, in the spot his fingers rub against when he puts his hand in his pocket There is something so unbeilably hot and RAY about that. And him using it all during that interview the next day, responding to Fraser's hand on his shoulder, wanting to drop to his knees.

Ray thinks he understands, understands that this is the sort of thing that you can see when you don’t look at it, like the clump of light next to Orion. I really like that.

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slidellra August 23 2008, 00:53:48 UTC
Oh.

I LOVE it when you write. I love this, I love them, I love that I already want to reread it.

*dances around just a bit*

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zabira August 23 2008, 03:21:04 UTC
&hearts &hearts &hearts

you are made of magic. AND SO IS THIS FIC.

*draws many hearts around it with sharpie*

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j_s_cavalcante August 23 2008, 07:22:35 UTC
Poetic and beautiful. Wow. I adore this piece.

(Does it have a title?)

Such evocative images as always. You're such an atmospheric writer, and I love love love this dreamy atmosphere. Thanks so much for sharing this.

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luzula August 23 2008, 12:39:26 UTC
Mmm. Fraser's really getting under Ray's skin here. The moment where Ray thinks about dropping to his knees is just--so hot. And I like the beginning, too.

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