New fic- Fraser/rayK

[llassah]

Author: llassah
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: R
Length: 1665
Notes: Sometimes, Ray just needs to be told to stop.

The first time is during the heatwave. He taps along to his heartbeat, rubs his neck, fingers coming off slick with sweat, worries at his lower lip, the thrumming itch under his skin more than he can bear.

“Stop,”

Comments

[etcetera_cat]

You have a most lyrical way with language, missus. I'm proposing to your brain again, just so you know.

[nos4a2no9]

Guh, L, you always bring the hotness. And this was even more scortching because it was all about delayed desire, about pushing against something you can't fight. Smoking and achingly sensual and Jesus, do I ever want to know what happened after that door shut. Mah-velous work, m'dear. You are one hell of a writer.

(I won't even mention how realistic this story is ;-)

[akite]

Beautiful. That's all I can say.

[mlyn]

Fraser as an inexperienced, natural dom. I like it. It's subtle enough to fit them both, but tremendously effective. Your lyrical, sultry prose is wonderful.

[simplystars]

[drops in via friendsfriends] *waves* Er, hello :)

I really like the push-pull you've created between them - Fraser figuring things out, and Ray waiting for him to do exactly that. The unexpected comfort and security that give/take brings to both of them, well. It's smoldering and as scorching as the heatwave you put them in. :D