FIC: "beyond the spells (hey diddle diddle)" [HP, Hannah/Romilda, NC-17]

[el_em_en_oh_pee]

Title: beyond the spells (hey diddle diddle)
Author: el_em_en_oh_pee
Pairing, characters: Hannah/Romilda, Harry, Zacharias
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2645
Summary: Of course, at some point, the potions have to wear off. (hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle)
Author's Notes: So I promised i_love_amy that I'd write her something femmeslashy and smutty after she pointed

Comments

[nightmarezangel]

that was um....interesting

[el_em_en_oh_pee]

thank you, i think.

[nightmarezangel]

that was a compliment lol was just speechless

[i_love_amy]

heeee that was disturbing and awesome lol

[nightmarezangel]

i've been meaning to ask, is that icon a pic of Bonnie? it looks quite a bit like her...well except darker hair and i of all people know that not everyone who plays a weasley really has ginger hair...

[i_love_amy]

No her name is Kat Dennigs. Isn't she hot? She was in Big Momma's House 2, the 40 year Old Virgin, and Raise Your Voice, with Hilary Duff. (which I SO haven't seen << >>)

[i_love_amy]

Dennings**

[kasiopeia]

I liked it very much :) But I didn't really understand it all with Zach and Hannah in the end. The "Everything sinks in"...

Great use of the song.

[el_em_en_oh_pee]

I think I mostly explained it all to emei, but the 'everything sinks in' bit in particular refers to it all sinking in-- Romilda realizing that she's gone way too far and that she can't wile her way out of this one, that Zach and Hannah are by no means going to let this go.

I'm ecstatic that you liked it! ♥ thank you thank you thank you for reading/commenting!

[kasiopeia]

Ohh, I understand it now :) Once again, great story and interesting plot.

♥

[gyzym]

Oooh, that was a compelling read. I agree with the comment about the song--adds a poetic feel to it.

You write femmeslash very well, which is unusual in this fandom, so I commend you for that.

As for the bit at the end, I get it and the ambiguity is interesting, but I think you'll probably get some comments to the effect of "WTF?". It's good, though, just a little too vague for the average reader to get.

Quite good overall though. Popping it in my mems.

[el_em_en_oh_pee]

Thank you so very much! ♥

and thank you thank you thank you! I'm honored.

[emei]

Interesting, and well done too! I like the dynamics in it, how you turn things upside down by the end. And Romilda's growing fondness/crush on Hannah was well developed.

I'm still puzzling over the end, though. "Plan eye for an eye, or plan victim of war?" I guess means they've been planning something like - a) rape her, or b) lock her up and possibly use her as love slave. The comment about Harry means she'll be exposed for everybody, right?
And then, suddenly, all is quiet. And there I'm lost again. Would you please explain a little for me? I'd really like to know. :)

[el_em_en_oh_pee]

Thank you!